Reviews of Primordial Cultivator
Primordial Cultivator
Idczhen
- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
[Reviewed on: 15-06-2021] *Glimpse of initial chapters.* GOOD POINTS: - Likeable MC - Not extremely poverty stricken, MC has some saving and stuff to support himself - Weak to strong trope is executed well - MC can think, he observes and doesn't go round being bullied physically (verbally, yes) - You don't have to cringe because MC is dumb, because he isn't - Expect beasts, Qi cultivation, maybe realms too, and lots of action - Some realistic elements are also depicted because we spot corruption, injustice, torture, bullying, conspiracies too WEAKNESS: - The narration style is highly 'telling' rather than 'showing' - Author's omnipresent tone is everywhere, which gave lesser screen and insights to the character - Readable novel, though there are tense fluctuations - Some information is repeated, such as chapter 2 and 3 has repeated info about Meng Yan.
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I’ve read to the latest chapters (200+) Starts off great, and while you think of the setting and characters cliche at first, be prepared to be surprised. Author uses cliches very creatively and in ways you don’t expect. Characters are very well fleshed out and interactions are fun and very interesting to read about. Although the pacing of the story was a bit slow at some point in the early chapters, it picks up later on. Great female characters and MC. Initially MC may seem to be quite typical focused on being strong type of character, but this changes as more about his past is revealed and he’s much more than that. He is no way dense but rather smart in a few ways (but could be dumb in others), so the relationships progress at a very satisfying pace. Definitely try this out.
This novel is amazingly balanced, the MC is not some unique character from the start and his beginning is humble but realistic. the women in this novel are his golden finger, Mr.author simply gives the MC an understanding and honest personality in expressing his feelings and thoughts, and the most important thing is his ability to catch the attention of powerful women even when he does nothing to gain their attention,(the fanny part is the fact that those women know this and talked about.) The best part of this novel is the balance in relationships between the MC and his women (2 until this moment), for once he is not a useless man that his women help to clean the troubles he makes because he is mature enough to understand when he should retreat and when he needs to advance, also his first wife (the main heroin for the first 250 chapter and the one who helped the MC from the start until he gets his second woman around chapter 230) is very powerful but not omnipotent, she needed the MC emotional support more than anything and this was the main reason for accepting the MC as her husband, she simply suffered so much that if the MC betray her then she would choose to suicide than to live with her shattered heart, also she is very smart and supportive and on top of that, she has enough wisdom to guide the ignorant MC in his first shaky steps and help him in adapting for the cultivation world. Other than the amazing relationship between the MC and Elder Jing (1st wife) and his clear attitude toward other women, you will find the plot in this novel quite unexpected for this kind of novel, I don't want to spoil anything because this is not some generic cliches and it will be your loss if someone spoiled it for you, after all, it's rare to find this kind of novel. Another good point about this novel is that you will not find small plots everywhere but there is always a bigger role for everything that happened in the PoV of the MC with barely any useless filler, seriously I read 250 chapters and I still find it hard to find a clear filler or unimportant events, I can even say that there is only one plotline from chapter 1 until chapter 250 and it still going. In the end, what I am telling is that you will not be disappointed in the MC and will be not disappointed in the Harem and will be not disappointed in the plotline and will be not disappointed in the development of the novel. anyway, if there is something negative about this novel then it will be the poor world background and the moments when Mr.author changes his mind regarding some things and then change it immediately inside the novel without any consideration for the previous chapters. other than this, I can not remember any negative points, because I was busy feeling good and happy to read this novel. Thanks for writing this novel, Mr.author.
A wise man once said, "When life gives you lemon, you make lemonade." But lemonade also takes water and sugar to make. In this world Yang Wei doesn't even have the resources needed to cultivate to the Gods. I'm interested to know how this story progresses. Maybe he will start a green cultivation technique like all the green technology we have but in an Eastern cultivation world? Maybe he will simply recycle. Better still, he will sell lemons to all the greedy cultivators and take their resources! Whichever path Yang Wei chooses, you should read on to find out! Note: Completely biased review. I had nothing better to do and was just trying to meme hard. I probably failed but whatever. Memeing is hard.
I dont even know where to begin. It starts fairly well. Even with all the cliches it was still good and palatable. But as time went on, the MC became more and more unbearable. He starts out a cunning smart guy, but by chapter 80 he is an idiot and constantly scared of everything. It is disappointing to see him become that way for the sake of comedy. At least, I hope it was comedy, because if it wasnt then it was straight up atrocious.
50 chapters in no problems with the writing easy to read and the mistakes there is aren't a big deal as there not often. Over all the story is fine but at same time many forced situations and from my initial thoughts on what the story would be from the description of a mc that has to pave his own way in cultivation no matter how stacked against the odds thing are against him with his background and cultivation talent have to say he's had things being pretty convient the whole time. For some reason author has made the concept of strength a cultivator should have at each stage come off pointless. Just makes everything seem completely forced when you have the mc who still at the first tier in cukvation being able to inflict wounds or now even kill someone multiple tiers above his level. Even if the excuse is they were tired I don't see it working why because even a tired body builder is still going to be stronger then a average person, a tired long distance runner is still going to be able to out run a average person. Let alone people that should be hundreds of times stronger then the mc and having abilities like spiritual sense and experienced many years of battle compared to the mc who's still new to all of this. World background honestly is lack luster I don't expect to know of higher worlds or other kingdoms by now but at least give the places the mc is at sense of existence. Descriptions on the size of the location, what's there what it looks like and the people and what there doing. This is good filler and at same time as long as done right meaning full filler because it fleshes out the world the mc is at. The Author deserves praise on the upload rate very rare see a author put out 14 chapters a week when so many struggle to just put out 1.
i dont know why this is so highly rated .. maybe author deleting other reviews .. mostly focused on the romance/harem part .. feeling develop too quickly, story not yet developed enough to comment, .. awkward dialogue except that writing and everything was above the mark .. no proper grasp on the power levels , cause seems like he is both weak and strong / skip levels all at the same time .. 3.7
I was really enjoying this novel at the beginning. The mc was not swayed by beauty and while it is expected that love interests would come along, the way the character developed is terrible. Every female that is stronger than him plays with him like he is a toy. He has not backbone, helps women who scheme against him, and just caves in to anything females want. He forgives females pretty much instantly, while a male would get the most humiliating treatment. If you are looking to read a novel with one of the biggest simps on this platform, this is for you. Otherwise, avoid this like the plague. This review is at chapter 188.
The beginning if the novel was good, but from the start of the meeting with the senior of another era, it has go down form my view. The next thing is that he has not the right behavior of his yung body and the middel old soul. The last think ist the fast cultivation tempo of the boy with the badest spirtroot of the world. (With no extra things for cultivation.)(Logic???)
Dont waste your time. Only the first 50 chapters are interesting and nice character development between mc and heroin until an annoying girl gets introduced and unnecessary comedy starts where mc also makes unreasonable things like helping the girl when she constantly only made his life harder. The story literally has filler this early in the story with annoying comedy.