Prays X-Human

Profoundly imaginative.Its amazing how ingenious the author is! I was transported to a vivid world of action and intrigue.Definitely keeping an eye on this one ❤️

This was the third time im reading the war novel genre.... i really like the story, the author done a good job! The storyline was great too...!

Today I had a fruitful conversation with a real editor level writer (@FACE). The reason I write in Spanish this story. The first recommendation was to change the google translator (https://translate.google.com/?hl=es&sl=en&tl=es&op=translate) for DeepL (https://***.deepl.com/translator) To say that when you translate in google from Spanish to English, and you want to translate back from English to Spanish (I conceived an error by changing words and therefore in grammatical mistakes) With DeepL it is no longer like that. The second thing was to put pauses between paragraphs. The third thing was not to make the narrator's dialogues too long. If you help to improve, bring an idea for a change and it will be done. Hoy tuve una fructifica conversación con un verdadero escritor nivel editor (@FACE). La razón escribo en español esta historia. La primera recomendación fue cambiar el traductor de google (https://translate.google.com/?hl=es&sl=en&tl=es&op=translate) por DeepL (https://www.deepl.com/translator) Decir que cuando traduces en google de español a ingles, y quieres volver a traducir del ingles al español (concebía un error por cambio de palabras y por consiguiente en fallos gramaticales) Con DeepL ya no es así. Lo segundo fue colocar pausas entre párrafos. Lo tercero, no hacer muy extensos los diálogos del narrador. Si ayudas para mejorar, aporta una idea de cambio y se hará.

I have read so many stories and very few have held me to in one place like this story. The story has an excellent story. The characters are those you can easily relate to and honestly get to love in the early stages of the story. The writing still is not just unique but brilliant. This is for sure one story I will follow definitely keep my eye on because the author knows how to build a world in words and for sure understands how to present it before his readers. Thank you for a great story and I looking forward to your updates.

The story is great!!! I was reading it in a robotic tone and wonder why though... But reading your review. I clearly understood why... I mean English is not my language. Keep it up!!! Looking forward for your success!

This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say... Shameless Promotion: Check out my novel: Blood Burning Blood. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/blood-burning-blood_19157009606618805

I found your novel very mysterious. You have a wild imagination which is portrayed in your novel. At first, I thought aren't the chapters too short for WN then on CH 5 and 6 I realized you were making them purposely short to make your novel mysterious. My advice to the author would be to put some time aside for editing as the novel has some punctuation and grammatical errors here and there.

Hey! Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com  (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email soon.

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.