Reviews of Pokemon: The Advent

Disclaimer: This is a story about Pokemon. Don't read if you don't know what Pokemon is. I won't spend half the chapter talking about what all these pokemon look like, I'm going to assume everyone knows.

I am really enjoying this fanfiction so far and I hope that it doesn't get dropped. I really want to see where this one will go. Keep up the good work.

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I usually don't post a review for a story until it has about 15 to 20 chapters but this pokestory is so good that I just hope to shamelessly encourage the author to keep writing and not drop this prematurely. So Author-Kami keep up the good work and potential readers don't miss this gem.

The setup is original enough, new world, new timeline... and thats all the good i have to say. The main character is shallower than the barely mentioned supporting cast. The fact you immediately give him half a team of strong Pokémon and a bunch of OP exploits undercuts all character growth potential. Then you follow that up with secluded training... there’s zero attention to pacing, story development, or characters. But it’s still... relatively early, you failed the start and hook but the world you’ve set up could support a great story.

Overall a fun read but this story seriously giving me a mtl vibe. The use of word "elf"is usually found in mtl pokemon chinese fics. And the mechanism behind the pokemon grade in your story is nearly identical to the one in the rise of dark pokemon( a chinese pokemon fanfic). I am not saying these as a bad thing. I am genuinely curious whether the fic is translated or not. It is really a good fanfic.

Excellent start. Mc's characterization & world building are the highlights of this fanfic. Character interactions are good. Hope author completes this fanfic.

buen capitulo, tengo una recomendación para pokemon de tipo planta y es petilil con habilidad de ritmo propio su evolución puede aprender dansa aleteo (bicho) y danza pétalos (planta) eso seraun desmadre y realmente me gusta mucho la estética de ese pokemos anunque solo es una recomendación pd: snorlax no puede faltar en un equipo op lo puedes capturar su evolución y de comenzar ----------------------------- - buen capítulo, tengo una recomendación para pokemon del tipo de planta y es petilil con su propia capacidad de ritmo, su evolución puede aprender dansa aleteo (error) y pétalos de baile (planta) que serán un desastre y realmente me gusta la estética de eso pokemos aunque solo sea una recomendación **: snorlax no puede faltar en un equipo operativo, puedes capturar su preevolución y comenzar

A nice spin on the pokemon world. These kinda stories really let the mature generation that grew up with pokemon re-experience the world with a more mature setting. I like how he has a system, but the MC is not getting super OP with it or abusing it to flex on THE WORLD!!! The story is a mix of elements of pokemon+solo leveling-ish+system+charm of soul pets+Bringing The Farm To Live In Another World. Not that the author literally takes ideas and items from those stories. Just the concepts are similar. If you like those wn, you should give this a try. An original world that includes pokemon with an original cast of characters. READ IT! You won't regret it and will be dying for more.

buen capitulo, tengo una recomendación para pokemon de tipo planta y es petilil con habilidad de ritmo propio su evolución puede aprender dansa aleteo (bicho) y danza pétalos (planta) eso seraun desmadre y realmente me gusta mucho la estética de ese pokemos anunque solo es una recomendacion pd: snorlax no puede faltar en un equipo op lo puedes capturar su pre evolución y de comenzar ------------------------------ buen capítulo, tengo una recomendación para pokemon del tipo de planta y es petilil con su propia capacidad de ritmo, su evolución puede aprender dansa aleteo (error) y pétalos de baile (planta) que serán un desastre y realmente me gusta la estética de eso pokemos aunque solo sea una recomendación **: snorlax no puede faltar en un equipo operativo, puedes capturar su preevolución y comenzar

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This is a good novel with new texture and innovativeness was too good to be remain in low ranking it should have been higher but I not the one to be saying that But I will say this its to low for this to be release 1 chapters daily at least try please too release 2 or more if you are happy feeling good you can try

buen capitulo,tengo una recomendación para pokemon de tipo planta y es petilil con habilidad de ritmo propio su evolución puede aprender dansa aleteo(bicho) y danza pétalos(planta) eso seraun desmadre y realmente me gusta mucho la estética de ese pokemos anunque solo es una recomendacion pd: snorlax no puede faltar en un equipo op lo puedes capturar su pre evolución y de hay comenzar ------------------------------ good chapter, I have a recommendation for pokemon of the plant type and it is petilil with its own rhythm ability its evolution can learn dansa flapping (bug) and dance petals (plant) that will be a mess and I really like the aesthetics of that pokemos even though it is only a recommendation **: snorlax can not miss in an op team you can capture its pre evolution and start

buena trama espero harén organizado ya que pokemon es un universo que vale la pena y por cierto recomiendo no contactar con legendarios o míticos por ahora es molesto cuando de repente tienen algo como un huevo de mew o un pokemon con 3 tipos

buena trama espero harén organizado ya que pokemon es un universo que vale la pena y por cierto recomiendo no contactar con legendarios o míticos por ahora es molesto cuando de repente tienen algo como un huevo de mew o un pokemon con 3 tipos

10000000/10 would read again👍

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This needs some stones and attention, honestly an amazing novel so far, a new take on the realistic/cataclysmic Pokémon reality. I hope the author can continue writing and keep his creative juices because I'm sure this will aoo become a hit fanfic

Alright, I don't know what to say, other characters except for the MC is completely boring because they were not focused on too much. When I read fanfics and novels, I want to have a favorite character aside from the MC and by the way things seem, the author focuses too much on the MC that the other characters are just, nothing with only minimal appearances here and there. The pace is slow on the other hand and that could be boring. Aside from this, there are punctuation mistakes, and please focus more on using semi-colon and em dashes here and there because there are times when they are necessary in the story. Grammar, little errors here and there but better than other fanfics out there. At the first paragraph, I wasn't hook, nor through the rest of the time I was reading this.