Kylcas
Ahah I love it ! Even with some mistakes from time to time et a a quick development at times, it's a very entertaining, lighthearted (for now at least) and enjoyable read ! The clearly defined and original personality of the MC is a nice change from usual mc ! I'm very interested about what will happen ! +added !
I cannot say much yet as there is only 5 chapter's now. But the synopsis got me and when I started to read it I wanted more and more. The chapter's are little short and there is some grammar mistakes in them,but it doesn't affect quality of the story that much. What I would want to see more would be the world background,as there hasn't been much of it yet in the story. The characters are quite a well developed and I like the mc character development quite a lot,so not that much criticism there but there could be small improvements there but since there is just 5 chapter's I'm going to wait and give more detailed review later.