Pinnacles' Edge

So far reads like an action thriller movie. A woman on a mission and on the run from pursuers. I like the action sequences and the pace of the story so far I'll let this one stay in the queue so I can read more later !

Wow this is finally something different from those love fictions and "rape stories". I'm really liking it. Thank you my friend for recommending something new. And I would really like to recommend it to others... Guys it's something nice so far so do read it.

First of all, Wow! This is not what i expected when i saw the picture. You can get feelings from each word The story is well written Overall, it is good

This story about survival of female lead after losing her family. I wonder how she become strong and overcome the circumstances or obstacles in her life to revenge.

Well done my dearest author...the first chapter already piqued my interest to read this novel. I hope this novel release chapter frequently. Don't leave us cliffhanger.

This was an enjoyable story to read😊 It’s clear what type of people the protagonist’s family are by the kind of words they say when their life is in danger. Some of the parts written, especially the end of the fourth chapter, seem a bit like summaries. Maybe the author could expand on these parts. I like the dialogues as they give a lot of information about the situation and the type of people the characters are. In the fourth paragraph of the chapter 5, I think the author was trying to write a different word in the sentence: ‘compile by her request’ In chapter 5 paragraph 9, I think it’s meant to be ‘escape’ not ‘escaped’ I like how the protagonist’s emotions changed in the fifth chapter from fear to hatred. It’s a great story.😄

Omg the suspense is killing me, need more updates fast, dearest author. What a captivating book. The first sentence literally draws your attention and you're wondering whats going on, and you keep reading and reading until you finally see. "New chapter coming soon" its that good.

Superbly written in my opinion. It started strong, but I like it. I hope it will be kept that way. Although I'm not so sure if it matches/suits the genre romance. Only at ch 16, though. Maybe it's too early to tell. However, I am enjoying the flavor of the whole story, if you know what I mean. It's exciting with a little mystery mixed into it. It's a great piece of work so far. Keep it up author!

This work combines romance and adventure in a way that is quite remarkable. The protagonist is a strong woman with some remnants of youthful naivety in her. The build-up and slight suspense is entertaining and enjoyable. I would certainly recommend this to all who like a adventure/romance story with a promising plot. Keep writing, I hope you have a lot of fun!

Although this book has only just started, I am very optimistic. The title is concise, but the content is not simple. The plot of the story is full of ups and downs, which fascinates people. I hope the author can persist in updating and bring good stories to more people.

I loved this. Im thinking of reading till I have enough to review but ended up reading all chapters. The language is good. I was impressed all the way. Maybe not perfect but enough to narrate a good story. Gve full marks for update, coz i'm not sure of the release pattern. The character developed hand in hand with the storyline. The portrayal of an intelligent FL were excellent. I'm waiting for the ML real bad. Overall, this had lots of potential and should reach most readers. Will keep this book in my library! 😘

This is not your typical romance, it is a story filled with intrigue and twists that hooks you right from the beginning. The chapters are short and something always happens in them that leaves you wanting more. There may be some cliches ( what story doesn't have them) but it doesn't make it less enjoyable. If you like romance, betrayals, action, and conspiracies, then this is a read you will surely like.

There are some stories which are underrated and as much as I read this one I feel like it's the hidden gem a lot of people haven't explored completely. Writing Quality 4.6/5 Yes there are some grammatical mistakes here and there but not to the extent to hinder its process. This is one of the better written stories on WN in terms of writing quality. Update stability 5/5 Works for me Story development 4.5/5 How the story grows from the violent scene to exploring all the good and bad moments in a girl's life is quite nicely shown. Character Design 4.2/5 The details of FL are to the mark but the rest of the characters still need some work on them. World Background 4.8/5 Since it's in modern times not too much of the details regarding the world is needed. I read a few reviews as well and also their reading status but I feel like some of them are simply there for the sake of writing a review. Within less than 5 or 10 chapters, when the story has just begun how can they possibly justify the novel. But whatever, I really really like the novel and its amazing and different kind of plot.

The story is well written and interesting.I'm not the type of person who likes this kind of story but your story really hooked my up.Because I alss wrote story about violence so your story is great anyway.

The novel had a very strong start, it somehow reminds me of Kill Bill. While I was interested in reading more, I think it would be nice to go over the chapters to refine some descriptions and dialogue for greater impact. It was a great read overall. I look forward to more chapters.

Slow start but after you continue resding, things getting interesting. Character development is good keep it up... I honestly having the thought of wanting to read the next update... 😉😉😉

Have to be honest, from the first sentence of the first chapter, your mind sump starts because its been captivated, so different things go across your mind. And the best part for me is that the chapters aren't too lengthy that'll bore you but instead would make you want to read more. So far I'm loving it.

Author-san!~ I liked the way you wrote your story, not so confusing at all and it really picks my interest. The synopsis are so cool I was in awe for a second. Your story development is great, you first started with a violent, heart wrenching chapter then after that you came to the flashbacks. Really good transitions. So far so good, I have no say anymore Keep on writing. Looking forward for more chapters here!~ English is not my first language so I apologize for the mistakes on grammar plus typing errors

Part of a review swap, valid until Chapter 20 Writing Quality: One of the better written stories on WN. But there's still ways to improve. It's not perfect but it's readable and the story flows. First of all, this is just a suggestion however I'd suggest not capitalizing your yelling. Second, go back and edit your chapters. There's a few mistakes like random commas eg, Chapter 7- "The next day (,)?" You could put a full stop here or eve. - The next day - Third, speeches. Your usage of speeches read's more like a script than a novel. I suggest writing " " (character name) said or (character name )said, " " though you've improved that in the present chapters. I'd go back and edit the old chapters with the new speech format. Updating Stability: Stable 5/5 Story Development: 4/5 - From what I've read so far, the story is developing and the mysteries your adding in is explained. But I felt like you could have dragged on the mystery regarding the FL real family, at least up until the end of your first volume. Some things just popped out of no where like Cao Gao's connection with the FL; I believe you could have utilized this better if you dragged on the mystery. Character Design: 4/5 - Not bad. But aside from the FL, we don't know much about the other characters. I hope you can explore this in more details, perhaps give them their own mini arc? World : 4/5 - Going in a good direction with the world background, you've thought it out and planned it well. But I believe you could add more explanation. I'd like to see more of the female leads connection with other characters, and how she plans to take revenge. Overall : 4.4/5 - Looking forward to seeing this novel grow and will definitely keep reading.

Salute to this novel!👍👍 A lot of twists here and there, made one felt not bored... Every scene has a connection... The MC's strong personally, her fighting spirit were introduced properly.. (love her) Paired with poetic lines (which is hard for me to do*sigh*) Great plot... Keep it up!😊😊