Pillars of Rapture

Moonfall. The City of Hell and Hope. A goliath metropolis, home to the biggest light in the world, the Foundry. A well of infinite energy that bleeds prosperity into everything it touches. No one knows truly the workings behind it, least of all Lyle. A discarded young war veteran left to fend for himself in this dense concrete jungle. Burdened with PTSD and non-sensical hallucinations Lyle's life was over before it began. But something real lurks within the madness. Pillars of Rapture is an epic fantasy book I'm working on. Any feedback is much appreciated! World Map --> https://www.reddit.com/media?url=https%3A%2F%2Fi.redd.it%2Ft7pbj2n1kyeb1.jpg