Reviews of Pet Master War Online
Pet Master War Online
Adinda_ku
- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
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To be fair, writing quality appears to look like it's nice and clean, but it's very lacking in ability, there are words that are misused in various places throughout the first chapter. Writing quality doesn't only refer to grammar, spelling, etc... It also refers to the execution of the story, on how well the author begins the story, the flow of the story, and the amount of detail written, etc... I gave writing quality a 2/5 mainly because: The summary states that the MC is average and ordinary, but the first chapter doesn't even introduce the MC at all as if the introduction was meant to be skipped. This reflects poorly on the design of the character as well. For that I gave a 2/5 to both story development and character design. The world background is interesting and is the only thing that makes it worth reading this novel. I gave it a generous 4/5 in hopes that the author does not fail to meet the readers' expectations on the expansion of this world. Stability of Updates is 5/5 and the reason why is because the author has let the readers know on the front page of the update status/speed.