yaejin
A great start from the author and I really hope there will be more updated! The plot starts off rather mysterious but I want to tip my hat off to the author(s?) of this story! The writing is very simple and well-paced. This is a really big compliment because it makes everything clear, concise, easy to understand, and engaging. Which makes the plots, though mysterious, very easy to digest. If anything I wish there was a bit more atmospheric descriptions but that's just a personal preference of mine, as the current style already more than serves its purpose. I really felt like these chapters flew by so quickly and I want to find out more. The spicy scenes are super delicious as well and make me want to fan myself heheheehe, please include more of that, okay?
Personally I don’t read much of steamy stories, but I could definitely recommend it to those who like the genre. Grammar-wise I don’t see much of a problem, pacing is good also. The characters are dynamic, as well as the settings and the writing. Even with few chapters you could expect much from this book. Nothing much I could really critique. Keep up the good work.
Iyay!!! I'll give you 5 Stars For this book✌✌✌. Even my writing sucks so I won't judge it, hahaha. The story is unique and easy to pick-up just by reading the synopsis, and even if you leave this story for a while, It's going to be easy to come back to it because of the cliffhangers, haha. Character Design is great too, all of them are unique in their own right(including the mother, I guess...) All in all, you have a really nice book here. Keep up the good work✌✌✌
Ok. This is a great story. I had fun reading it. I like the characters, even those that are not in fl's good books. Maybe not her mother. Definitely don't like the way her mom ruined her life. In a way, i could understand even her sister's point of view. I don't like the fact that i'm hooked and there are no more chapters to read😂 sorry author, but this is cruel to your readers. I was reading chapter 8 and i was glad i still had 3 more to read but, nope. Turned the page for chapter 9. But there's no chapter 9 for now😂
The story is great and well thought out. Sometimes the character names did confuse me, but that's okay. Anyway, let's talk about the writing. The plot and the character development is beautifully done. The quality of writing is top-notch with almost no mistakes. The scenes have been explained well and it did get spiced up quite early, I am not complaining though. Eager to know why Shu-hwa's mother treats her that way. Great work author. Waiting for the next chapter
Okay I had to calm my nerves before writing this review. What a cliffhanger after reading Chapter 8!!! I need the next chapter! Hahaha I have to praise you for writing this wonderful story. The story has good narrative. I was plunged into their world while gripping on my seat. I added your story to my library coz I want to read how she will finish her revenge.
Wow... That was an interesting story. I will definitely add it into my library and continue it till it's end. And what's wrong with her mother. I ready hate such people to my core. To be frank I didn't really expect such starting. The authors writing quality is also top notch. The plot was unique and immediately piqued my Interest. The story development was also well in pace. Not too fast nor not too slow. I could feel the author's unique writing style and I liked it.Author did a great job in describing scenarios.All in all author did a great job and looking forward to read more. I will definitely give 5/5 to encourage author and for his/her hardwork.