Reviews of PENANCE

Well damn. I saw the prologue after reading this but I'm definitely going to read that first before continuing I love the way the story unfolds so far but I feel I should the prologue first[img=recommend]

Howdy! I read your story and a bit of your prologue so far. Ive got to say, chiefkiss. your writing style is very fluid and articulate and allows for so much creativity to flow onto the page. Your world is really cool and the concept of your main characters are great and original. I see you upload a lot so please dont stop haha!

Absolutely amazing. every single product was on point. you deserve more than five stars[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]

Wow, wow, wow. I can't stop saying wow. This is beautifully written and some parts of the story made me imitate a tomato -cough- for a few moments. Of course, they were perfect for research purposes. The novel is good so far and there are a lot of details written. The author did a great job in writing this book.

Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady This is my review! Hope you like it! 😉 Dear new readers, please give this novel a chance and I assure you that you will be surprised in many ways! 🙏

This is my favorite Webnovel I've read so far! Super gripping, such professional writing I'd find it in a bookstore, but with the tight plotting, mystery, steamy scenes, and a hardcore "villainess" of my favorite manga, anime, and manwhas! I am going to stay abreast of all updates and root you on!

So, ths book is amazing, it even popped up on my suggested. You making big move Mineva, keep writing it's amazing. Also, keep this plot, it has six paths (naruto pun)

The confusion is real from the get go, hurtling us down the rabbit hole. The writing is stabilizes us inside the characters headspace, leaving us just as confused. Very interesting read!

It's a good read. The writings are clear to the point, with a bit of work it would be even more promising. all in all its a good read, good luck! Kudos to you.!

This is a still a new novel with only 4 chapters, but so far the boat is sailing at a nice pace. Nothing is rushed in this novel, and there are no info dumps about the history of the novel's setting or a giant wall of text explaining the characters. This novel has a strong outline to stand out on its own while also meeting popular trends around WN. Seeing how the cover says Part 1, I hope this book will be both successful and supported by the community, so we can see more on how the story unfolds, perhaps expect a lot of worldbuilding as well.

What is this? Why is this so great? Gotta read this one! it's very interesting! I was immediately hooked from the very first paragraph! Nice plot too! And the writing is so awesome! Overall it's freakin good!!

Overall a nice read! This gets me riled up and excites me to read after the chapters! Nice cliffhangers at the end. More power to your writings and more readers to come! Peace ✌️

This book is a surprising find. The opening is a bit confusing, but it makes you want to keep reading. The level of cockiness in the FM is hilarious! Bravo author! I look forward to updates😁

The story seems a little bit dark but that's a breath of fresh air for me as most of the novels I've read are either too cookie cutter or filled with plenty of tropes. I like what I'm seeing and the info can sometimes feel a bit much but this is definitely a future classic in the making.

Amazing, I was surprised by such a way of writing, I love the fluidity with which you handle your story, I hope for more development in the future, I will be waiting.

I'm giving it full five stars for the hard work that the author is putting into the story. So far, there are only a couple of chapters and not many characters are introduced so it's hard to talk about the character development. On the other hand, the author is descriptive when it comes to the world background. It's a good thing that can come in handy. The plot is a little fast-paced and so far, it's looking like the story has great potential. Keep up the good work author!

Great writing!!! Authir has a good way of unfolding the story in a myster-filled but exciting way. There's also humor incorporated and there's actions and emotions too. I'd like to point out, though, sometimes there's shift in tense from past to present (I'm guilty of it too). Other than that, prose is pretty much way above most in this platform. Premise is also great. Keep on writing, author. This is awesome.

This is very nice. The first chapter was written in a mysterious way which immediately catches the attention of the readers. At first, it was confusing but then at the end, it finally makes sense. It's a pity that there are only a few chapters I honestly want to read more and keep going. But hopefully, the author will continue to release chapters.

The story is really great! Even if there are only two chapter, the story hook me with how the author write it! I didn't know at first that it will be like that in the second chapter but it's a pleasant surprise (I won't say it here, read the book lol). It's honestly a great story! Keep up the great work author!

absolutely stunning world building! the first chapter is definitely gripping its as if you get sucked into the story itself! nice read and please upload more chapters dear author :)