My name is.... You Shen!
AUTHOR:
If you were reading this, that means you didn't get to see my Wonderful(Horrible) writing before. I Went through the story and fix a little bit.
Enjoy the story.
== Begin ==
Chapter 1
The sound of the forest and soothing fresh air that captivates a young man's lungs brought him out of his slumber.
The moment he open his eyes, the wilderness was the first thing he saw, it captivated him but in a different reason than you expected. He doesn't know what's the feeling but it doesn't feel right or it's more like it's not natural for him see such sights to begin with.
"where am I..." He was laying under a tree to keep himself cool from the heat from the sun, while wildlife and forest surrounds him with activities. it's strange when he looks around.
He can feel something all around him, it's a very faint feeling. It's in the air, the trees, the ground, in the water, and in himself.
He closed his eyes to concentrate this strange feeling inside him, it's like a warm feeling washing over him. But it didn't last that long, as soon he felt the warm feeling, he was broken out of his Concentration because he hear some rustling on the grass nearby.
He shot up to his feet and was very startled, he was standing around 5 feet tall wearing a linen Blue Shirt and Linen Black Shorts. He's Physical Appearance is like an 10 year old boy with Short Black Hair and large black clear eyes. As soon he standing up, he was getting ready to book it out of there. He thought it was a bear that made those rustling sounds but it was something that made him feel silly and slightly embarrassed because It was a Grass Snake.
Grass snake would be about twenty to thirty centimeters in length and about as thick as a finger. It would only be able to feed on some puny insects. That would mean Grass Snake is a common small animal that is typically harmless.
He sigh in relief but than this happens.
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Ding!
Rewards for seeing your first Spirit Beast
+ System Activated
– Note: Say "Stats"
+ Inventory Activated
– Note: Say "Inventory"
+ Legendary Starter Pack
– Note: Say "Open (Name) Pack" and the items will be place in the inventory.
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"Spirit Beast?" He Thought, It sounded very familiar to him, and this system is also familiar to him, it's like the top of his head but just can't grasp it, a really frustrating feeling but can grass snake really live more than 50 years? maybe it has to do with it being a Spirit beast.
"Stats!" probably has more info on there about the current situation he was in, he thinks.
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Name: You Shen
Rank 10 - Spirit Scholar
Martial Souls
▪︎Spirit Brain
▪︎No Ring
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Rank 10 Spirit Scholar, Martial Souls, Spirit Brain, and No Ring but does that have to do with the situation he's in. He Sighs in frustration.
"Open Legendary Starter Pack...." He'll just go with flow approach and learn as he goes on.
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Ding!
Legendary Starter Pack Opened!
One Conscious Spirit Ring of your choosing ×1
Random Conscious Spirit Ring x 1
1,000,000 Years Age Ring Emblem ×1
100,000 Years Age Ring Emblem ×10
10,000 Years Age Ring Emblem ×50
1,000 Years Age Emblem ×100
Spirit Ascension Pill x50
Mystic Water Pill ×50
Note: All been Placed in Inventory.
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Ding!
Advice:
Would you like to use your Random Conscious Spirit Ring for your first Spirit Ring for your Martial Soul Spirit Brain?
Yes or No?
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"Sure why not." It's probably beneficial to me if It's an Advice from the system, "it might have to do with those Spirit Beast," he thought.
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Ding!
Heavenly Snow Woman Will be your First Conscious Spirit Ring for Sprint Brain.
Please Choose Age Emblem for the Spirit Beast.
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"1,000,000 Age Emblem." Go Big or Go Home.
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Ding!
Because There's is no Soul Bone from the Heavenly Snow Woman, she'll use her snow and ice Essences to be your Second Martial Soul which has no form.
Because you just broken through Soul Scholar Realm and entering the Spirit Master Realm, your body needs to harmonize with the vast spiritual power of the one "Divine Snow Woman" 1M years Spiritual power.
10 Seal Will be Placed in order for your body not to Explode from the vast Spiritual pressure the Spirit ring emits, as you Spirit level increases the seal will naturally unseal and give you more power.
Get comfortable because your body needs to harmonize with this power, so you'll be unconscious for an hour.
Advice:
Because Divine Snow Woman used her Ice Essences to be your second Martial soul, you'll get to choose it's form, so it's better to do this now while your unconscious rather than later.
Example:
One Conscious Spirit Ring of your choosing ×1 Let's you choose any Spirit Beast to be your second Martial Soul form.
Note:
Don't Forget to use Age Emblem for your second Martial Soul.
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He doesn't know any Spirit Beast besides Heavenly Snow Woman and Grass Snake. "Heavenly Snow Woman, 500,000 Age Emblem." He choose Heavenly Snow Woman because he remembers how small the Grass Snake was.
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Ding!
Confirm!
You have one minute to get comfortable.
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He sat down under the tree when he first woken up to this place, he just hope the Grass Snake will not crawl on up his clothes while being unconscious. He soon Fallen unconscious while laying against the base of the tree.
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"Master... it's time to wake up...." A beautiful voice echo throughout his consciousness.
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"Can't believe there's someone beside little Yuhao who sleeps in the forest!" Tang Ya patted You Shen face and shot a glance at little Yahuo.
Yuhao can only laugh awkwardly.
"Bei Bei what should we do? we can't leave him here it's to dangerous!" Tang Ya said
Bei Bei looks at the kids appearance.
He has short black hair and a stature slightly taller than others of the same age. However, his most attractive features are his large, clear black eyes and long eyelashes which wouldn't lose to a girl at all. Even with his commoner's clothing, his outstanding appearance could easily draw the eyes of others. Only the word "beautiful" is fitting to describe him.
"I Don't feel anything from him," Tang Ya frowns because she used her Purple Demon Eyes on him.
"That's True, I don't feel anything from him either. Usually are Purple Demon Eyes can see through people Spiritual Power level that's lower than our level," Bei Bei also used his Demon Purple Eyes.
Tang Ya and Bei Bei was really astonishes, there's some one who's Spiritual level that's higher than there's. They should be able to guess what rank is he but they just can't for some reason. Tang Ya really wants him to join while Bei Bei wondering why they can't see through him.
Huo Yahuo can vaguely sense his Spiritual power level because of the divinity Dream Brother has. Yuhao could tell the sleeping boy has just broken through too, the same as him.
"He Probably was here for the same reasons as me," Yuhao thought. The reasone was a Spirit ring to broke through to Spirit Scholar Realm to Spirit Masters realm.
As there in there own thoughts the unconscious boy name You Shen just finished his Harmonizing with his Spirit rings.
"Ugh...." You Shen let out a light Groan, and slowly opens his eyes.
"Your Awake!" Tang Ya was exhilarated when she saw You Shen open his eyes.
You Shen was slightly confused so he began to compose himself to clear his head and thinks more clearly. He remember waking up like this before only this time there we're three people standing before him.
A girl with a look of relief standing in front of him, a kid about his height with clear eyes standing beside her, and confident youth that's staring intently at him. He still remember the a woman voice in his dream and couldn't help but say, "what was that?"
Tang Ya smile "I said that if your awake! but that's not important right now. Are you okay? cuzz you really have some guts to be actually sleeping in Great Star Duo Forest by yourself."
He really was, usually there will be a Spirit Masters watching after him to keep him safe from Spirit Beast that's way out of his league. Here he was sleeping in inner most sections of Great Star Duo Forest where there's a hundred years Spirit beast usually are. Luckily he wasn't that far from the Entrance they came from.
He was confuse why she worried about him or was she like this with everyone. "Great Star Duo Forest is that where I am?" He Thought, As he jump to his feet to greet them.
"Yes I'm okay, I... ah... was just relaxing for a bit and I seem to doze off." It's half-true he admits, but it's not a lie either. He was getting comfortable and he just so happened went unconscious or "Doze off."
"Oof same! Well my name is Tang Ya, the leader of Tang sect and over here is My wonderful boyfriend who keeps staring at you, I think he has a crush on you!" Tang Ya said Jokingly to irks Bei Bei, he just sighs and stops trying to see your Spiritual level.
"Over here is Little Yuhao who recently join my Sect! He really knows how to cook really good fishes!" Tang Ya also introduce the kid name Yuhao who was about the same height as You Shen but he slightly shorter by a few inches.
"What's your name?" All three are listening intently because there are curious about you. He was silent for a few moments before he answered.
"My name is.... You Shen!"
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