Paying The Price

Dear author, i know i don't speak for self when I say please update more often the story is getting good and you are leaving us hanging. Thanks for the story.

Still a little bit frustration with the male character because he need to be more romantic to her wife.I more like their daughter side which very cute,clever and mature type,I wish she can be little genius agents to protect her delicate mother

I am in love loving it's. Different from other stories in this app hoping to many amazing chapter😍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌

Very interesting novel, that kid it's amazing me when i have 4 years i was playing with my legos with out care all stuff happend in my day, man great novel ;)

Other than a few grammatical nuances, the story seems good so far. I haven't read all of it but just the first few chapters to get the gist. I am intrigued by the FL, Diane, and I want to know how she is gonna take her revenge. Do update regularly for us fans!

So, I can't wait to review this. The story is good and hope that others would find this gem. I know you're going to edit those misspelled words and the grammatical errors is still readable. Also, I think you should change "Am" to "I'm". Just saying. Cool story, though. And keep up the good work :D

Read this till chapter 28 ---- Not a big fan of this genre, but this book certainly got me hooked. The best thing about this book is - character description.. detailed enough so that readers can imagine and picturize it. Just beautiful! There's so much to praise and very little to complain about. If only, the author could hire an editor to work on the grammatical errors and spelling mistakes, this book can reach the tops. The writing quality is average. Keep up the good work! I am thoroughly impressed with the work!!

A great story.... A strong female lead with a sugar pie... Looking forward to how things progress in the story... Great job author keep up the good work... Also I would like to request your attention to the grammatical errors and spelling mistakes... Please have check... Rest all's good... Gr8 story hope it gets many more readers...

Dear author I have read only a few chapters but I really liked you story so far, your story is kind of new to me, it's interesting and I enjoyed the few chapters I have completed.

Amazing work, level grammar. An interesting story about family relationships, with beautifully set dialogues and planned text. The author is a master at constructing gender intrigue and is well versed in the psychological characteristics of human nature. His romance will deliver pleasant moments for lovers of romance, and a good form of text. In addition to this, the author has an extraordinary talent and subtle humor, which will undoubtedly bring the reader many amazing moments when reading. But I'm not a fan of this genre. It should be noted that the introduction of IMHO is somewhat delayed, there is no “click” that forces the reader to drop all affairs and rush to read the next chapter. In my opinion, the chapter should immediately captivate the reader, although this as an author doesn’t work out for me either, but in the last couple of days I have read several amazing short stories where I saw this. This is talent. Nevertheless, the author of this short story is a great fellow, to write such a smooth text. Undoubtedly, readers and fans of romance are seen reading this novel. Rated 4,8 out of 5 possible.

Nice story,keep up the good work author. Am in love with the mother protecting sugar😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

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Where did the Author go💖💖this is an amazing novel and it's hurt that it doesn't get to be updated that much💖💖I hope the Author is fine 😢

I love this stroy so much that I want to finish it I one go but how 😢😢😢 it's like the Author forgot all about this Novel already 😢😢😢

Very good! One of the strengths that many may hate about this novel is ML. It's nice to see that ML doesn't magically become a loving husband and a good father. He has difficulty dealing with emotions (something he grew up without) and naturally makes many mistakes in dealing with his wife and daughter.

Nice novel, really interesting, I'm so glad that I'm reading this novel, the story line is okay, every thing about this novel seems fine by me, I really appreciate your work author...

So, I really like your novel, just that a little pet peeve of mine is grammer.... Otherwise, I love novels with a baby as a chracter, and this babay's charms are undefeatable! Keep up the good work!

Although there's grammar mistakes, those don't influence the reader's ability to understand the great plot and amazing dialogues between characters. Overall, the updates are consistent so far, and I'm looking forward to more. Good luck!

Found this by coincidence while author recommended reading my story. OVERALL, Every potential is in it and this is getting interesting by every chapter. I find the woman fierce and with the mindset of revenge, I'm curious about how will she turn out someday and what approaches will she attempt? Cool that author has already planned a couple of chaps. Looking forward to this. Keeping this to my library. :)

Not bad, except for the misspelled word here and there, it has a nice premise and easy to understand. The first few chaps alone is enough to get you hooked to the story. I'm not good with grammar myself but its easy to spot others mistake haha, so I will advise the author to scroll through the chapters all over and correct what needs to be corrected and I'm sure the book will do great, and you won't lose potential readers. I'm looking forward to read more, so I'm gonna keep reading, good luck on your story author.