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The story is based on India, which is one factor that grabbed my attention. The story development is great as so as the character development. There are grammar issues, but I don't mind since I can understand the story anyways. Profound writing technique, another factor which makes this book astounding. Nice work author!!!

why did u remove the chapter, all that work for nothing.......................................................................................................................................

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Awesome novel Nice pace of plot Good R 18 Based on indian gods and demon Op mc , badass mc Unique cultivation realms Fun to read , must read

Intersting Good to read No mc that blush Slapp thing Badass He got a pet🤣 He got women He got women He got harem He is on his way To be a non blushing mc with a harem🤣🤣🤣

Pretty good story. I particulary like that author is using Indian concepts. I hope he continues on same path. Also dual cultivation novel is always a plus. R-18 scenes are pretty good and I like more. Keep it up author.

que puedo decir, esta es una excelente historia!!!!!!!!!!!!!! espero que puedas seguir con tu novela y no la dejes caer, la relación con la madre no está mal, solo no dejes olvidadas a las mujeres que va conquistando

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I really like this novel and the MC, keep up the good work......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

The story being based on India while also having some kinda of system cliché, have great quality in background story also have some kind op mc I really liked it and I just started reading and it was fun really it would've been better for continuous update but that's also good which will make us anticipate what is next and thanks to the author for this good quality novel we will appreciate if you don't drop it

I like how the story is based off in India which actually grabbed my attention when I started this novel. So far I must say that it is actually pretty good and hope that the author keeps the chapters coming. Keep it up.

I read the first couple of chapters and I think i grasped the idea of where this is going... It's fine for what it's trying to do... despite some odd grammar and a few far-to-casual comments from the narrator. It's not too exposition-heavy (thank God!)... But the characters arent that deep either.

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I love your work!! Too much snu snu scenes! I love that! Keep up the good work!! May we support each other dear author!! You're the man, bro!!

The power system of this book is quite solid and I like that, the story about cultivation while being based on india is quite bold so hats off to that. Nice story and keep the chapters coming.

This good is pretty good. Of all of the books, I've read this would be the third-best. It has kind of a lot of action which makes it interesting. More chapters please.

First of all, thank you for the chapters. The story has a great plot, and I am amazed by the unique introduction of the character. Keep up the great work!

I know the trouble of doing a system based novel. So I salute you bro, though I rarely get into a smut genre I still dig how people seamlessly apply the sex scene with the fighting base cultivation novel. Use the Grammarly application or extension if your using chrome to write to help with grammatical errors. Thanks for the chapters keep it up.

This is a good novel with a good start. I hope the author will continue making a nice work. This is a good start. Keep improving your work for the readers, thank you

So far, so good. Concept is well-presented as the plot is intriguing. The character design have a depth to them as well. I do find minor grammatical errors such as punctuation issues, but this can be edited by proofreading. Overall a promising story. Keep up the good work.