A really good start. The topic seems fresh and interesting to read. The writing quality is a bit bad, there are parts where the sentences dont really make sense and other parts that need more descriptions but overall its a good read. Cant wait for more chapters :d
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sad that this noevrl doesn't get enough recigni6evrn tho it's really good, only problem is the small amount of chapters but overall has potential and is somewhat different from the usual troupe