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Part-Time Star, Full-Time Dad

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Flat_Moon
Flat_MoonAuthorFlat_Moon

Honest Rating 4. At the time of this review 28 chapters have been written. I'm the author and I truly believe that I've made something special from the new system that took me some time to come with to the streaming experience being shown in word form. Character design and story development are the best I've ever done since I started writing as an author. I think I balanced the dad life and fame life pretty well though this is a review after 28 chapters. Protagonist is a confident, smart, humble but he still has his flaws that will go away as he grows. I lose stars in update stability, pacing and world background which has always been my weakest points Also grammar is a slight problem as I'm kinder dumb. You'll see little mistakes like using the wrong "There" and an odd placement of commas with some other common mistakes. With that being said I think this

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MisterImmortal
MisterImmortalLv14MisterImmortal

Love it. Though I must say, I like this more than your fanfiction. If you can provide constant updates then you will surely get a contract. Will be waiting for more. I wish you luck 👌🏻

mouhib
mouhibLv4mouhib

Pls more updates.because this novel is🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥.and pls don't drop.

General_Rain
General_RainLv15General_Rain

This is one of my favourite stories online. Through the changes between each rewrite the author has evolved the world from a great fan fiction of marvel into two strikingly different novels. I am looking forward to the continued antics of rose and her Almighty Daddy.

Scarr9
Scarr9Lv11Scarr9

Love it keep it up. Hope the ex wife doesn't use the child to get back in the relationship other than that more updates I like where this is going so far

HerMajestyEmpress
HerMajestyEmpressLv13HerMajestyEmpress

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Cakep99
Cakep99Lv1Cakep99

Reading this on my first time in Webnovel app. Very satisfied. Excellent story with HAREM DAMN IT!!! A lot of sexy beauties too. Amazing parenting. More chapter please :)

Readable
ReadableLv15Readable

If you dropped this story let me know. I've been waiting for 22 days for the next chapter, (I was 2 days late to the latest chapter) and you haven't posted since.

GrapeLord69
GrapeLord69Lv13GrapeLord69

I want more updates this story is amazing and so is your other one. I just wish to have good updates so we can read it a lot more please.

xianxian
xianxianLv4xianxian

nice novel....and you're a man of culture as well the progression is a lil bit slow but its fine..but all in all you did a good writing this novel...FLOORGANG!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lazy_dude
Lazy_dudeLv4Lazy_dude

Indeed unique author....... We have seen many of this author work.... Tho all of them are dropped..... I hope he will find his taste here! No.I wish!

0vrLrd71
0vrLrd71Lv50vrLrd71

Well, I really want to give you full stars but even you said what you're not good at in your own review, even through all that you're still one of my favourite author here in WN, I just hope you keep doing what you're doing, and improve of course, and you'll be good, I really think this is one of the best stories out there, thank you for writing this and your other novels too, especially with what the world is going through right now...

Phoenix1998
Phoenix1998Lv6Phoenix1998

One of the best stories. So far. So great. Characters are great. World building is great. And the update is also consistent. Please keep updating

Thanara
ThanaraLv4Thanara

been reading this novel 3× and it's really, really good, except some minor grammars all in all it's A.M.A.Z.I.N.G. specially the a father in marvel, I hope you continue that story, I'm a fan of marvel that's why and your plots and theme are amazing making me wanting more.

vcut
vcutLv4vcut

stability of updates is my only concern and as of right now i don't know if its dropped or not. Author san pls tell us if its dropped

lemons69
lemons69Lv4lemons69

this is a very good read, very funny, and has a lovable characters you cant but root for.. keep up the good work good sir.. and don’t drop this, this is fire! 🔥🔥🔥🔥

LuxShi
LuxShiLv4LuxShi

Absolutely love this novel! Author if you're reading this I have to thank you for writing such a great novel! The only thing I have to say about it is the updates. I'm not pushing for updates because making such a masterpiece takes time but I wish I could read thousands of chapters. On a serious note, keep up the great work Author! And if you're wondering if you should read this you absolutely must do so.

Xen_120598
Xen_120598Lv4Xen_120598

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Handsome_Squidward
Handsome_SquidwardLv4Handsome_Squidward

This book is awesome , i enjoyed it very much and you should give it a try if you like Dad stories. If you update more it would be more awesome

Bakkoy
BakkoyLv4Bakkoy

This is a great story and very entertaining, I read this when I was frustrated but well this is what I was looking for. ha ha ha ha. Thank you author and continue the story.🙏🙏