Reviews of Parallel universe traveller

Hello guys,this is author Shofi here.This is my first creation at WebNovel,hoping to make it a good piece of art. Comment me and point out my mistakes ,so critics are mostly welcomed.Add it in your library and vote me,that will inspire me to work faster on the chapters. Thanks guys!!!

Less than 10 chapters so far but I am already enjoying it if I ignore lack of spaces after full stops and wrong punctuation in elipses. Good potential... dear author plan out your story and don’t focus on update stability take your time to write good quality and try getting an editor in future.

Story is good...tho slow pace it's good......go ahead ..,.................................,....................................,..............

I don't have a clue about the time theory thingy, but so far, this novel includes somewhat explainable excuses about that theory and now it's time for some magic......Story development is good, MC character is also fine though there is only 7 chapters. Hope, it will be a fine story in the future........

As it's your first try,it's so good. Keep going brother. The story is interesting & flow of event is good. I appreciate your such kind of creative work.

Story and world development is good. Let's see, if the MC is gonna be a badass or not. Waiting for some magic in action... You should hire a editor soon, so the story keeps updated regularly.

I have read 10 chapters and the story is quite enjoyable. Keep the story updated,,,atleast 3/4 chapters per week is must. If you write about 100 chapters, this novel is bound to be a success. Keep up the good work............

The story writing is in simple language and it's good. I didn't read many stories but this story is good so far i have read. Good luck,author. Hope your story turn out to be a success.

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