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OUTRUNNING TIME

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Dvanzy6
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Hello lovely readers! This is your author, shamelessly giving her own book a review. I'm extremely pleasured to tell you all that our book got contracted!! I'll try to update everyday and please don't hesitate to share your suggestions in the comments. All your opinions will be strongly valued. Your votes and gifts shall mean a lot to me. Thank you so much for being such considerate readers! Regards Dvanzy6 ❀

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Pooja_Damani
Pooja_DamaniLv1Pooja_Damani

Keep it up author. Loved it too much. πŸ’ awaiting for your next update. My arms were covered with goosebumps right from the beginning. Loved the way you depicted the mind of a person with depression.

Aryna_Stan
Aryna_StanLv4Aryna_Stan

I loved the book and I'm very picky about books, time travel is always fun and the Author portrays that well. I'd prefer you'd give the book a try yourself and I recommend that you do!

TheALONEMan
TheALONEManLv2TheALONEMan

This is a very great novel. I like the plot and drama surrounding it in the first parts and the narrations of the story made it more dramatic in the feeling. If you're interested in teens fiction with a unique storyline, then this is for you. :)

raima_alam
raima_alamLv2raima_alam

I loved this book so much! Its unique and it just melted my heart. I could feel the emotions of the characters. The plot is different from the usual stories I have read. Hats off to u author πŸ‘ .

shrEk2o3
shrEk2o3Lv12shrEk2o3

I read the initial chapter and what a brilliant plot this is ☺️ The first part already captured my interest and I'm already looking forward to how the story would unfold. Added to my library. I highly recommend β™₯️☺️

Vidit_Verma
Vidit_VermaLv4Vidit_Verma

The writing is nice so far and I enjoyed reading it a lot. The novel has a good plot and is promising . The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is overall good and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come .[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=coins]

Chewys
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Its a very interesting idea for a novel, Its very good and I liked it a lot. Also I like the way you name your character, its very unique. The world building could certainly have some improvement though.

THE_WORDSMITH
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wild_imaginatorII
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I read the blurb, I was curious. When I read chapter one, I was more than curious. Dear author, I so much love your cliffhanging skill. I'm hooked.

JP_TransLaLa
JP_TransLaLaLv2JP_TransLaLa

A promising start to a time-travel fixit tale. The author's writing style is extremely easy to read and very descriptive, and includes some great concepts to keep your interest as the story progresses.

Jo_J
Jo_JLv13Jo_J

In your story, you deal with many very difficult issues, such as suicide, rejection, mother's trauma after the child's death, life after death, or the existence of spiritual beings, and many other related issues. The plot is intriguing and your main characters are also. Well done! I hope Ophelia will overcome her traumas, deal with the rejection, understands her mother... and Xavier will understand that life is not easy for anyone... One thing ;) For the future, remember that jumping between POVs shows the imperfection of the author's workshop.

Primate
PrimateLv4Primate

Overall: This is a very good novel to read. If you want to read a fantasy book full of thrills, look no further than this. Highly recommended. Style - The author is using third person narration style. We are able to experience the feelings and actions of the characters. Well executed. Updating - As a writer myself, I give kudos to the author. Wtiting is very hard. I'm giving the autho 5 in this aspect. Story - Well planned. Story line is the heart of any novel, and this novel did a good job on its story. It's about a girl named Ophelia who'll embark on a journey to save a boy who committed suicide, and at the same time evade death itself. Hard to put down. Grammar - Excellent use of the grammar. No complaint on this aspect. The flow of the story is smooth which shows the effort that the author is putting into the writing. Commendable. Character - The characters are well written and designed. They fitted their roles, especially Ophelia. Well written. The other characters are well catered for too. Kudos to the author. World: Its based on the fantasy romance genre settings. The author put great effort into this and it was perfect. Well done.

basementerz
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Dear author, your book are totally great. Just wanted to say that I find your story are totally interesting! Please keep up your excellent work πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Also, if you have time kindly check out my book too!

RoseOfBlues
RoseOfBluesLv2RoseOfBlues

The book has a pretty cover but in my opinion, it still has some room for improvement. If the title could be made into an ambiguous one, it will attract a lot of people. I loved the synopsis! It hasn't given out the suspense and one would definitely be intrigued to read it, although it could be made a bit longer and slightly improved. The story is rather interesting but the chapters need to be longer and more engaging. Some parts of the story are great but with an addition of details, the story will definitely be amazing.

Little_Love_5727
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lazylyn
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Angelina_Daisy
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SleepyKola
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Oh Wow! Our story had a bit similarity in the soulmate stuff, while yours is with time, mine is colorblind🀣🀣 it hooked me up just from the synopsis! The beginning is goodx and ophelia... such a relatable oneπŸ’œ good job author! keep it up!

_midnightsunshine_
_midnightsunshine_Lv10_midnightsunshine_

The first chapter itself touched me. It started off on a dark tone. As the story progressed, though, the author brings out the little delights in the dark world. It's a leisurely read and is quite enjoyable. Keep it up!