Dvanzy6
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The writing is nice so far and I enjoyed reading it a lot. The novel has a good plot and is promising . The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is overall good and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come .[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=coins]
In your story, you deal with many very difficult issues, such as suicide, rejection, mother's trauma after the child's death, life after death, or the existence of spiritual beings, and many other related issues. The plot is intriguing and your main characters are also. Well done! I hope Ophelia will overcome her traumas, deal with the rejection, understands her mother... and Xavier will understand that life is not easy for anyone... One thing ;) For the future, remember that jumping between POVs shows the imperfection of the author's workshop.
Overall: This is a very good novel to read. If you want to read a fantasy book full of thrills, look no further than this. Highly recommended. Style - The author is using third person narration style. We are able to experience the feelings and actions of the characters. Well executed. Updating - As a writer myself, I give kudos to the author. Wtiting is very hard. I'm giving the autho 5 in this aspect. Story - Well planned. Story line is the heart of any novel, and this novel did a good job on its story. It's about a girl named Ophelia who'll embark on a journey to save a boy who committed suicide, and at the same time evade death itself. Hard to put down. Grammar - Excellent use of the grammar. No complaint on this aspect. The flow of the story is smooth which shows the effort that the author is putting into the writing. Commendable. Character - The characters are well written and designed. They fitted their roles, especially Ophelia. Well written. The other characters are well catered for too. Kudos to the author. World: Its based on the fantasy romance genre settings. The author put great effort into this and it was perfect. Well done.
The book has a pretty cover but in my opinion, it still has some room for improvement. If the title could be made into an ambiguous one, it will attract a lot of people. I loved the synopsis! It hasn't given out the suspense and one would definitely be intrigued to read it, although it could be made a bit longer and slightly improved. The story is rather interesting but the chapters need to be longer and more engaging. Some parts of the story are great but with an addition of details, the story will definitely be amazing.
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