Reviews of OutOfSerice
OutOfSerice
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I AM THE MC!!! That's what I felt like, when I read this LN!!! IN A NUT: MC who seeked thrill and ******* in past life is re;inced as Fugaku Uchiha's twin.. this is a somewhat slow paced novel... even though the author does not give us an INFO DUMP, he still details stuff making US FEEL EVEN THE LONELINESS IN WIND!! SIMPLY AWESOME.... Please, keep the chapters coming!!!
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great fic.. i see the potential for this. while the main character is not perfect in terms of personality, the mc is still better than any other mc than any other fics and novels out there(im looking at you jp mcs) story is also great, mc is op but you feel that he is improving at a fast but reasonable pace. other characters are also fun to read as well as the humor in it that will make you do a spittake
Originally, when I started reading this novel, I was expectant to see how these two characters would turn out. The slightly less than aware older brother and the emotionally detached younger brother. They have some kind of balancing effect on their two personalities even though the older brother doesn't get much screen time. I was expectant, but now I'm just disappointed. For some reason, the Author has opted to disregard his original story and is now essentially writing different random stories in the middle of the actual story. People in the comment section have been calling these little excerpts "filler". However, this term is incorrect. In order for something to be "filler" it must be part of the original story in some way. There should be a lead-in or some other kind of explanation leading up to the "filler". This does not happen. The Author breaches the actual story randomly with no indication of where or when it begins or even ends. Sometimes he'll switch to a completely different "time period" in the middle of a chapter, other times an entire chapter is one of these "shifts". It comes with no rhyme or reason. He has essentially turned his originally interesting story into a collection of subplot, slapstick comedy "mini-chapters" and doesn't even have the common decency to label where they are for those who wish to skip this nonsense. Overall, I am completely dissatisfied with the current management of this novel. It's an absolute pity. I would've rather not read the story rather than get hooked on it and then be forced to see this author royally **** it up so badly. It's such a damn shame. I don't know why Authors continue to do this. Just because one person tells you "oh, I really enjoyed that chapter where you told the story about that pervert who got punched in the balls and advanced the actual plot in no meaningful way at all." doesn't mean you should actually do it more than the original fucking story.
The story is great so far. I like the way the MC doesn't try to act like a kid to "hide his reincarnation". I mean, realistically, who would believe it anyway. Its seems more logical and safer to "be yourself" and to be taken as a genius. I decided to comment because of chapters 10 & 11. First, it was a shock to read 2 giggle chapters, i.e. made me giggle while reading. Secondly, those 2 chapters finally made the MC seem human and not just a anti-social machine. It also made me think that perhaps he was not completely anti-social but just so much above the other children why waste his time. He needs, as it was written, someone "interesting enough" to be his friend. In school, I preferred being by myself because I grew up around adults so kids my age seemed silly. (hehe) I chose to read and make friends with the librarian (to this day when she sees my mom she still asks how I.m doing). Sooooo - great and unique approach on a reincarnate keeping his memories.
It's quite good i like it I think this is a potential favourite then would be nice if he had cool chakra nature's like I've I've spacetime or even that idiot borutos chakra change swirl thing whatevs his mangekyo sharingan should also be new an unique he should have an harem too i real y like ino and tsunade it would be nice if there were more chapters a week too well this is the end of my selfish desires. I must say I totally like his personality not so much his parents though oh well......................................
A very good start I like the timeline because the MC will be able to change the plot (unknownenly but still) and I hope the author will follow this idea because there's no sense in writing a fanfiction if it is just to write the exact same story with just an additional character. P.S. Write more often please! :) P.P.S. Please no harem that would be senseless seriously have you even seen one in the original work?
