Reviews of Our Story: Spirit Wielders
Our Story: Spirit Wielders
Xierryne
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Hmm, I am shamelessly giving myself a 5 stars review since I enjoy writing this story and enjoy how it goes at the same time, but readers all have different opinions on books and the genres they like. For this particular book, I wouldn't say that it's exactly perfect. It doesn't use beautiful words like other books I've read as well. I'm only using words available in my vocabulary. From my experience, those who are not native to English have a hard time understanding difficult words and words that are rarely heard in daily lives, such as myself. I have a hard time understanding them, so I would take that into consideration since I know that not all readers are native English speakers. Also, I may have chosen the "Fantasy-Romance" genre for this book. However, must I remind you, this book will mostly focus on the adventure, fantasy, and action aspects rather than romance. That said, I will slip in a few moments of romance into my story, even though I have no idea how to write one, hehe... (forgive me as I have no experience whatsoever in writing romance-related lines and plots). I would say that this book will be leaning mostly towards Anime and Japanese terms, such as dividing the volumes into story arcs and whatnot. However, I will also be using other mythologies and legends from all over and use them as inspiration in my book. Their names might be the same, but their background would not. I am hoping that I will be able to bring readers into my story, as I believe that a good story is a story that's able to bring its readers into its world as if they're living in that world. I AM writing this story out of pure imagination and ideas from watching Animes, reading other books, and looking at pictures or even my own experiences. And with this shameless review, I hope you can enjoy my book~! - Xierryne Author's Note: - I will wait for your honest reviews in the reviews section. - I will try to improve myself more and expand my vocabulary as I write this book. - You are free to point out my typos, misspellings, or even grammatical mistakes. I will try my best to fix them as fast as I can. - This book is still under editing stage when I write this review, so please bear with the typos and mistakes still visible in this book. I am not the best author out there, but I will try to make this book a fun ride for you guys! Thank you so much for giving my book a chance~! Happy Reading~!
Wow, just wow. This story has a large world building and it’s very descriptive in both characters and its world. I enjoy the FL and the struggles, the magic, the sense of family in this novel. The author has done a great job! If you read this, you can definitely picture it as a show from scene to scene! Keep it up Author!
I think I gotta write the review now cuz the story hooked me up, and I have not finish reading the whole stuff! The plots are good, the descriptions are on point, i might have a bit trouble remembering who and who at first cause too many characters appear at the same time🤣 And I like the long chapters!! made the wait worth! please keep it up, author! Im gonna anticipate the upcoming ones
This book is really amazing! I came here after i read the author's bc fanfic, and i say... this book got me hooked up, especially when im not a fan of original stories. But this one is just perfecto for me! The plots are really nice, and a lot of details put in into each chapter. The characters are unique and they have their own sides and personalities which complements each other. Im a big fan of Japanese characters, fantasy, and magic, just like bc. This story is an amazing combination of the three of them! Great work author!! I recommend those who like Animes and magic fantasies or something along the line to read this book!!! 10 our of 5 from me.
I have no words! This story is amazing, and i recommend you all fantasy readers to read this book~! The characters are amazing, and i am also somehow relating to the MC very much! There are so many readers! I can't believe only a few of them reviewed this book. I command you all to review and rate this story XD No, but seriously.
This story is so well executed and I am absolutely intrigued! you write so well, miles ahead better than what I hope to write. this is truly a very well developing novel and I am thoroughly enjoying it. the traditions and attire are simply well coordinated and the descriptions are so very vivid. you have amazing world building execution and I hope to learn from you how to execute mine. this book is really a favourite of mine now.
