Reviews of Otsutsuki In The Celestial Realm [HIATUS]

This novel in itself seems more Original than a fanfic, only taking in bloodlines and some names of well known characters (eg. Naruto, Kaguya, etc). It is quite well written with no easily seen grammar mistakes, even before the edited chapters. In all honesty the author should’ve just made it his own without using the fanfic bits, as this is something I would legit buy at a book store. Basically this move is reasonably good and you should read it.

All i can say please dont stop writing this masterpiece ......................................................................................

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imagine reading a story that is not set in naruto world and randomly naruto shows up. Yes, this is it... Its a joke. what a joke. no wonder author also dropped it.

bruh I love your fanfic. for now, I don't have a problem with anything in your story. problem make a little time skip when he actually starts training seriously. make the MC op for his group.

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excellent, good start, kaguya the best. ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Is this dropped? If so it is a shame. There are some grammatical mistakes here and there but i think it was a good novel with how everything was mixed and it was quite unique too.

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Hello there Victor_Weismann. I love to give 5 stars but I cannot because you do not update a new chapter. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like a characteristic of all your character especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day if you not too busy. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.

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DAM I NEED MORE CHAPTERS. DAM I NEED MORE CHAPTERS. DAM I NEED MORE CHAPTERS.DAM I NEED MORE CHAPTERS.DAM I NEED MORE CHAPTERS.DAM I NEED MORE CHAPTERS.DAM I NEED MORE CHAPTERS.DAM I NEED MORE CHAPTERS.DAM I NEED MORE CHAPTERS.DAM I NEED MORE CHAPTERS. more plz

every chapter is so juicy. that's all I got to say. so I will keep coming back and rating it 5 stars. .................................... .................................... .................................... .................................... .................................... .................................... ....................................

Good novel, is literally a crossover of many anime series (Baki, Naruto, Kengan Asura, Dragonball) but although the author uses all these characters from other series, his world is totally new. We only know that all these races are in a universe making this story even more exciting. Something that would have to improve the novel would be the story, some parts would improve if it improves the descriptions and actions of the characters apart from that, VERY GOOD NOVEL, RECOMMENDED.

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Es una historia que me fascina,en el sentido de la trama de la historia, y a la vez me impresiona los novelas de chicos que rencarnan en otros mundos o diferentes tiempos temporales