Otherworldly Bartender System

”I was once the owner of the most prestigious private club in the northern hemisphere. I've served drinks to multi-billionaires, princes, and even to some of the biggest drug cartels of south and central America. Now I'm in an unfamiliar place, a different world, and even with an unknown voice that's in my head!” Dan was bartender and owner of the Griffin. A yacht who catered to some of the most wealthy and influential people on the planet until one early morning in a drunken stupor fell overboard, but rather than falling into the sea and dying a horrible death fading out of existence a voice suddenly said ”starting Data transfer... Synching host to world.zero_1127.wng”. Suddenly as he opened his eyes again, he found out that he was reincarnated into a world of magic, fiction, and flintlocks. where he and his system try and make his new tavern the Griffin the hot spot of all of the known world called ”Praven.” This is my first time writing a novel and any critique either minor or brutal helps me get better