16 Announcement

Alright, so this is actually my most popular story. The problem is, I started it at the same time as my first one, both of which were done when I had no idea at all what I was doing. A lot of parts of this story are ones I no longer like, which is why I've had such a hard time writing more chapters for it. Kevin is stiff and Rogue basically just follows him around. I also don't like the Gamer aspects anymore. I feel like they make the growth too linear, not allowing for as much creativity as he would have without it. It's also hard to constantly show his growth in levels translating to combat, when I could instead show his growth in control and power through demonstration instead of stat page. To this end, I'm rewriting the story without the Gamer elements now that I've had more practice writing. I want to make this story better than it was. If you want to check out the rewrite, feel free. It's called Marvel's Osmosian.