ORIGIN: How it all BEGAN

HELLO! This is still in an on going process and editing so it wont be going out to the world for the mean time. I'm a new aspiring author so dont expect much. Note that I do not own the cover and it is still temporary. Anyway, Hope it all ends well. THANKYOU!! So Here is the 1st draft of the synopsis... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Synopsis: Have you ever wondered as to how the world came in to being? Or how the univers was formed? To answer that, now, let me tell you a story... Once upon a time uhhh... there was no time, yes the concept of time did not exist at first, do you know why? well, I dont know too... Everything was dark beyond darkness known as darkness-sama *ahem*... known as [The Void Of Darkness] The [The Void Of Darkness] extends its ummm... darkness in to all spaces and corners there is and it is still expanding... But then one day, with a leap of fate, everything changed when within this ever- growing Darkness, a small... a pretty small spark of light flickered as if the darkness, where light cant even dream showing up, flickered and flickered itself with untamed perseverance... How bold of you flickering light-chan, darkness-sama is angry....*ahem*... Anyway.. Follow us and dive in to this world uhhh... a world wich is technically still not existing... and see for yourself how everything changed from one thing to another... ORIGIN, and how it all BEGAN ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ So there it is! so how was my synopsis? its my first time making something like this so if you got better a way to write it, please do help me THANKYOU!!