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Honestly I'm not that great at putting an in-depth rewiew, so near with me here. This novel is amazeing and honestly deserves to get 5 stars and I would have given it. If it would update. It's been a month and some days since the last update and the Auther has been commenting 'not drop' multiple times and yet thats been going on since around 12- 15 days. If not for that this novel is intrugeing, filled with action, good descriptions and grammar usage, and a very good plot line that has a lot of potential. And I hope that the Auther if they read this can post a chapter, and if not that at least say when you plan on updateing next so that at least we have a clue as to when to check the novel for *potencial* updates.

please no drop . ............ ...................... .................... ........................................................................

This novel is great but as time passes by the updates goes slower and slower making me unsatisfied but I know that the writer is not a machine so I respect your feelings but please update a little bit faster if possible make it premium for your story is really intriguing.

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Grammar and writing sucks. It makes me want to puke when reading it. This is a warning to the majority of people: don’t read this if you hate bad grammar/spelling.

Too bad.. maybe you can make a better proggress with the story.. ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... .... .... ..... .. .. .. .. . . . I think that Mc is so fuking retrd, original Mc on SAO is more mature than this novel Mc.... ... ... ... ... .. .. ... ... . .. ..

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So writing quality is pretty meh. Pretty frequent misspellings and grammar issues. It is not hard to understand what he's trying to write though. The spelling can be a bit jarring sometimes. Updates seem pretty good, though it remains to be seen if he can keep it up seeing as it hasn't broken 100 chapters yet. The story development I haven't gotten far enough in to decide whether it is going to be unique or not. Character design... The MC feels so cliche it's almost textbook. If you could copyright this as intellectual property you would be making big money. I don't know yet if the author intends to develop him further but right now he is nothing special. The lack of actual unique characteristics of the MC is very discouraging. The background of the story is SAO at the moment so nothing to really talk about here. Overall it's simply another anime system with an overtly cliche MC. I'll keep reading and update if it gets better, for now I'm just hoping this author can find his MC under all of the unoriginality. To the Author I hope you don't find this discouraging but I hope you see that your character needs growth and he doesn't turn into a narcissistic sociopath.

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So far, This webnovel has been quite enjoyable, I Recommend you get Grammarly or something else to help make your Webnovel a bit more readable. Hope you Can make this an even better webnovel in the future

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Very good the novel recommend to everyone to follow, will not regret. Very good the novel recommend to everyone to follow, will not regret. 😎😎

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well good novel, for infinite world type novel which chara dev from weak to strong more or less are Game, Zombie, Adventure so they can easily develop in next world..