Reviews of Op System

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Really good so far. Interesting how MC has a system and then plays a VR game... but does the system go into the game with him? I feel like it would but from the chapters it makes it seem like it doesn't. That's the only thing that confuses me. Really good otherwise.

I like it. A bold choice for the first world since so many hate sao but your writing seems pretty good so far................................................................... ......................

hayst its been 1 year pls comeback ............. .......................................... ......................... . . ..

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it's just straight up good it's better than my explosion chants like I don't even know what to say. Except can the author please update regularly cuz it's like he dies but then comes back to life after like a month or so

Author if you read my comment, what world will go after finishing the one. ------------------------ I leave a page (https://listas.20minutos.es/lista/mejores-animes-harem-388933/), of several anime, which of these will be a light novel. .................................................................................................................................. ................................................................ ................................................................................ .................................................................................. ..................................................................... .................................................. ...................................................................... ............................................................................ ...........................................................................

:) good keep writing it

A really good fan-fic for me and i really enjoyed reading the first few chapters but we will see it's future development

Loving this so far. Was gonna hate on the grammar and spelling at first, but after reading all of it(so far), i've really enjoyed the story and MC. Kudos to you, author, keep working :D :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)

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Nice man nice man nice nice job In use of the go eat less to look of em but in been in use may .................................................. ..........

First of all your character is bland and the side character is forgettable there is nothing memorable about them,second the development is too fast.I dont mind op character but its just too fast too much timeskip it's not interesting,and last the chapter is too short.

Go Go Continue write this novel dont drop this novel ......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

More more more man im hoping for more i really liked this one hahaha i hope you update more i will wate for updates.......... ..................

Why SAO? So many anime and you pick SAO? Really ni***!? SAO IS FOR GAY MAN. I gave this str because i just don't like sword art **** bababbsbdbdbnsnsnnsndndnndndmdmdmdmmdmdmd