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This story had potential but i feel that it needs a re write or sonething because there are so many plot holes its not even funny anymore. (Keep trying it takes a lot of guts to post a story take the feed back and help yoursElf improve) -Keep a better time line -dont leaVe major plot holes -read feed baCk from readErs Feed Back and rude comments are difRent
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