Reviews of One piece With A System

Amm gonna shamelessly review my own novel. The language might be a little difficult to read but please bear with me. I haven't written in so long so am a little rusty. And English is not my first language. The release rate might be a little slow cause I'm new and this is just a test novel. I haven't pre-planned this and I'm just testing some things before a new novel. But I'll surely not drop this even if I have to go on a hit us for long.