Reviews of One Piece: Usurper

Amateurish writing after a big break. Feel free to give your thoughts on what could be improved! This is a story I had in mind after reading a lot of gamer stories and waifu catalog stories.

The grammar I like the plot is acceptable half a cliché not very used but hey, it is interesting, it only remains to see the following chapters of the story and see how it develops

Good novel .....................................................................................................................................................................................................

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still in chapter 3 and loving it, chapter 2 was too good man, totally worth reading this novel, quality of reals books and not a random fanfic. read it people