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Reviews of One Piece: Transmigrated with Beyblades (On Hiatus)

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One Piece: Transmigrated with Beyblades (On Hiatus)

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Revised
RevisedLv4Revised

I guess using beyblades in the One Piece universe is just downright preposterous, but this novel spins it in a way even though it defies common sense it's still cool. Combined with its amazing interactions and that lovely fluffy romance. This novel really has a salubrious place in my heart. And also few novels rarely uses beyblade, so the idea is not really genius but I really rate the author audacity for trying something that could've ended up bad. I grew up with BeyBlade so I may be biased but this novel is a very fun read. Give it a shot!

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Agent_42
Agent_42Lv3Agent_42

Really good, pleasantly surprised by how well you make it fit together. I will follow this story for as long as you write because it's great. I also like the fact that you don't force the relationship.

Avatinius
AvatiniusLv6Avatinius

what can I say? the world is One Piece with no major changes at all. the main character decided to not follow the Straw Hats and travel with the heroine, but MC has done absolutely nothing in regards to plot till chapter 48 from where I am right now. spoiler alert. MC has done some stuff, but none of them has a lasting effect. He always goes and watches what the Straw Hats are doing, yet tells himself he won't join them. wtf, if the MC is gonna be so passive, either join Straw Hats or go to one of the Blues and not care about the plot. but, noo, the MC waits everywhere to look at Straw Hats and helps them at times, but not enough to change plot, no changes at all from original One Piece aside from Luffys Bounty, and I think the bounty of MC was first high, then author halved it or something in the later chapters, the MC of supposed 400m bounty isn't even a Supernova, like wtf. quality is decent, not the best. story development isn't good at all, follows the plot of an already made world and story. character design is stale and doesn't feel alive, not even the characters of One Piece people feel natural. world background, it's already of a world which is created by someone, nothing to say here. all in all, I tried reading this novel till chapter 48, but I couldn't continue. I personally didn't like how it was going since the start, but there might be people that might like it.

kng_maine9
kng_maine9Lv4kng_maine9

I was just wonderjng when is more chapters coming thIs is too good to stop, like come onπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜©πŸ˜©πŸ˜©πŸ˜©πŸ˜©πŸ˜©πŸ˜©πŸ˜©πŸ˜©πŸ˜©πŸ˜©πŸ˜©πŸ˜©πŸ˜©πŸ˜©πŸ˜©πŸ˜©πŸ˜©πŸ˜©

Darkend
DarkendLv6Darkend

Beyblades is one of the rarest used crossover fan fics with any other anime. Altjough I haven't heard of the charecters and beyblades you mentioned as I haven't watched beyblade after season 3 but it is still a good novel and I like the way you didn't make the mc too op from the start and let him train for it to get stronger. I hope you continue on writing this novel and not drop it regardless of which charecters you add I like this book based on the crossover itself. I hope you keep on writing and not drop it

Rugh13
Rugh13Lv1Rugh13

I really enjoyed this fan fic. It has one of the rare fan fic romances on this site that aren't just super forced. I had some things I didn't like with the story, but it didn't matter too much since I really enjoyed it, the only reason I'm giving it 4.2 is because of the very slow uploads. I would recommend at least trying it. I wrote this review after finishing chapter 64.

Lio12527
Lio12527Lv3Lio12527

😒😒Man can't u give more chapters I can't wait for capters plz give more updates man plzzzzzzzzzzzz πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™ it's really Interneting story can't wait

StrayGod
StrayGodAuthorStrayGod

First novel so I deserve to praide myself with a 4 star . . . . . . .

Crook_Shank
Crook_ShankLv3Crook_Shank

Author Is just a fanboy that watches One piece from the world. He doesnt interfere with the story or make a story of his own. It’s like watching youtube reaction videos of a person for watching one piece episodes. With some training and romance chapters. If you don’t change the story, or do something new, whats the use of fanfiC? It’s better to read one piece original instead of this.

AnakinSky
AnakinSkyLv13AnakinSky

Reveal spoiler

PKing3456
PKing3456Lv4PKing3456

Good book! But old beyblades, I recommend you to do the new beyblade series. Good how you fit im the one piece world and beyblade good storyline.

Daoist708179
Daoist708179Lv3Daoist708179

Good Story ................................................................................................................................................

ProcrastinatorGuy
ProcrastinatorGuyLv12ProcrastinatorGuy

This reminded me of that one episode about bay blade Moses... thank you!

PUJIT_FADTE_9415
PUJIT_FADTE_9415Lv3PUJIT_FADTE_9415

JUST DON'T DROP IT AND CONTINUE WRITING IT NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯

ONGFRFR
ONGFRFRLv4ONGFRFR

Reveal spoiler

KingRaiza
KingRaizaLv4KingRaiza

Good but tell me if its harem so i know when to gΓ₯ hΓ€r ifrΓ₯n:) anyways seems good but tell me so i know:)

Godlyghostwatcher
GodlyghostwatcherLv14Godlyghostwatcher

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Lazy_bone
Lazy_boneLv4Lazy_bone

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GalaxyDWolf
GalaxyDWolfLv5GalaxyDWolf

Awesome job. Great job giving something that you wouldn’t think have a combat capability and giving it one without making it seem to out there. I’m really impressed. If he’s gonna be a pirate. Have his logo be a beyblade and two bones with a galaxy in the background

Hacker_0790
Hacker_0790Lv1Hacker_0790

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