Reviews of One Piece: The New King
One Piece: The New King
King_Otaku_Nd
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From now on I will write three chapters per week. On Monday, Wednesday and Saturday. Hope you can enjoy reading this novel as much as I enjoy writing, also if you have any idea on plots, new crewmembers ( and how to recruit them ) and ideas about the novel in general. You can write it a review or in the comments. I'm also open to critics with good proof not the hate ones so come at me. I'm out...
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While I don't think it's bad, I don't think it's good either. There are plenty of plot holes in this that make me think "so this is the power of plot/author". The fact that the MC makes an oath on some dude he hasn't met and not apart in someone's culture is kind of weird to me. The fact that he apparently learned to use a lot of weapons also bugged me as he should have no weapons except a bunch of sticks. The fact he also learned ki in the one-piece world and not in his previous world also bugs me (He does martial arts he learned from his old world to learn ki). There a probably more I haven't mentioned but those are the ones that annoy me. The character cross overs are also stupid. Didn't the MC wish for the world of "One Piece" not the world of "One Piece + character from other worlds" Besides a few other plot holes that I can't be bothered to mention and some other flaws I can't remember I'll stop for now. The writing quality is good but could use a little bit of work as some of the sentences are missing words. The story seems good, the only thing that I don't like, and this is just a personal opinion, is the fact there is gonna be some kingdom building aspect in this fanfic. The story also doesn't seem planned out or at least some of the parts don't seem planned out as the MC said in one of the questions that he doesn't want to be too overpowered otherwise it would ruin the fun. Turns out the devil fruits he is gonna get can either destroy space or the ability to turn into a god-like figure. Both of them cheat like abilities. I haven't read all of the fanfic chapters so it might be better than I say it is or worse so you should check it out before judging based off someone else's opinion. I don't think it's anything special but then again, other people enjoy it so you might too. Have fun!
