Reviews of One Piece: Reborn as a Skypiean

The synopsis was quite philosophical. So here another one. Mc died(sadly). He thought his existence had met its end, however, he again opened his eyes, finding himself in the One Piece world. Reborn as a Skypiean. Or to be specific, in the tribe of Shandia, he will try to find the secrets of the race and would grow into an Overpowered Existence. P.S: People might ask about Harem. So, the answer would be No. I'm not sure. Most likely not, since Mc's personality won't allow that. However, if we talk about his personality, he might even create a harem consisting of 10 thousand princesses from 10 Thousand kingdoms from all around the world. ONLY to gain power and authority. So that's that. For now, I don't think it will be a harem. But if it does become a harem, you won't find any romance. Well, I will be more specific and say, There would be NO romantic feeling from Mc's side. ** Btw, here have some.

A good fic by an author who knows what she is doing. Mc is a new race which is a fresh idea. Things I liked: 1. Mc is not kind-hearted and naive, mc is not a cruel psycho. 2. Mc is not dumb, is cautious. 3. Setting 4. Author has good knowledge of op and explains well. Not much to say abt writing its fine and better than most fic on this site. Characters are alright and while not super fleshed out, they don't seem like bots when they interact with mc. Overall a decent one piece fic with potential.

Author totally didn't force me....... That aside, the book which currently has 21 chapters is coming along well. One piece fics are quite common but ones with mc of different race is not. Joker started it with his mc as a fishmen and wall here started as a skypiean. Writing Quality- Now the writing quality is pretty decent by webnovel standards and other than minor errors, it is pretty good but can be improved. Word count of each chapter is decent with each being 1500+. Stability- I give this five stars as long as author follows schedule they set whatever it may be but wall even offers bonus chapters which is always welcome. Story Development- Story development as of now is slow paced. Mc doesn't grow op quickly and slowly amasses power. While there are timeskips,they are small ones. We slowly explore the world through mc and see him progress which is refreshing when many compared power fantasy fics here. Character Design- The protagonist, Amon is an interesting character. He is a manipulative guy who is power hungry but he is not the cold type. He acts only when something benefits him but also enjoys what he is doing. His interactions with other characters are done well and overall he is an intriguing character. Coming to the side characters, I feel this is where the story takes a hit. The characters appear fine when they interact with mc but appear kinda stiff when on their own. I feel characters can be fleshed out a bit more and since the story is slow paced, there is plenty of room for improvement. World Background- I wouldn't bother much about world background for fanfics but wall has good knowledge of the source and lore. He explains things well and has done a good job exploring the skypieans and the shandia tribe. Overall a pretty decent fic which has gotten off to a good start and has the potential to be better.

Be warned this story although well written isn't for everyone, the few chapters i've read disturbed me greatly. I have concluded that only selfish psychopaths and people with sadistic tendencies are the only people who would truly be able to appreciate the stories. I do not know if the author is aware, but the human psych he portrays in the story is damaging to the mental health of the readers, consider yourself warned! Enjoy the dark abyss that is the human psych!

The MC is bland really emo angsty edgelord is literally the only way to describe him i mean someone risked their life for him when he was being killed and he goes onto manipulate and use all together not care about them no realy depth i mean you can see what he will do before you read it happen. Going no further I do not recommend also many of the reviews looks fake several say he isnt a phsyco emo sasuke with zero depth but he is but worse x10

Honesty, this fanfic is a nice breath of fresh air, unlike other ones that just rinse and repeat what their pears have done constantly, this one brings some new interesting aspects into the question. Also, the no harm/no romance thing is welcomed, to me anyway, a lot of fanfics don't excel in this area and its one of main downfalls of good fanfics. Ignoring the good writing quality, another good thing about this fanfic is the mc's personality, most fanfics that have a 'evil/non-hero' main character are honestly quite stupid and either make their character too evil or too soft, I feel as if the writer has found a nice balance between the 2. Overall, you should definitely read this one.

Honestly, I picked this novel many times before dropping it after a few chapters but now that I have no other descent OP fan fic left, I took this up again after all something is better than nothing. But like always, I'm still surprised that this novel has a 4.84 rating without a single power stone. That only means that either something fishy is going on with the reviews or there are a lot of people who have inner psychopath/sociopath personalities to call this a good novel n make the rating go up to 4.84

its trash just give up...…notice me senpai this story is so bad even though I enjoyed the story I mean the story was very good but give up...… notice me senpai this isn't even a one piece fanfic like where's luffy. stop talking about Naruto. but i really liked how he became a Yonko. so why did you decide to make him hokage when he was defeating goku... i mean its just bad at this point like he can already destroy the universe.. but he still got defeated by a loli.. notice me senpai...the grammar is so bad that i didint notice a mistake but it was still bad.. So like i said you should give up you trash author.

I am amazed how your mc learn techniques like he has a teacher haha like life return which can only be learn by cp member and rokushi which only marine can learn tell me author with the long history of pirates and marines fighting have you seen a pirate use any of the rokushi none right the only thing they can do is make their own version base on the six powers like koru footwork base on shave and sanji sky walk base on moon walk and for sanji and koru to learn this technique they need years of practice like sanji he pecfect his sky walk blue for 3 years the time skip now tell me why can your mc learn it like the techinque can be learn easily

Author nerfs mc too much. With all his one piece knowledge mc cant win against 40 years old weak uncles even after 8 years of hard work. So dont expect too much.

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majority of this reviews are paid i think

It's a novel with a powerful, evil and manipulative MC who will do anything to achieve his goal. Overall, it's a good novel worth reading.

Since he caught me reading the story I'll leave a review detailing what I feel about it so far. One Piece but it's based around the Sky Islands with the Shandians, you say? im sold. This is the kind of story that has something for a special kind of One Piece fan - a really unique story, interesting characters who have depth and amazing development, a high-stakes plot with a gruesome path, and really easy to binge-read. For me, i found the characters to be the highlight of the novel. Especially Amon and Raki. i personally have a thing for motivated souls. So i couldnt help but love them. If you want a novel for Villainy, the synopsis for this novel makes this sound like ‘One Piece,’ but all of the participants are stepping stones for Amon. Don't expect really ruthless, bloodthirsty, cruel antiheroes. Because they arent. Amon is the best the Main Character for this kind of novel who bent the world to his will. I would be really disappointed to see this story be just a guy putting on a facade as a Shandian, more martyr than the true, dark villain I adored him to turn out to be. But luckily Master4thWall here is simply too based when it comes to writing. it starts to get really good in terms of deception and power. Through conquest in fear and dominance. This is exactly what I love when it comes to a more 'Antagonist' character. Not good, yet not pure evil. A man willing to do what it takes to get to the top of the world and hold it within his hands. This work appeals to me, you should take pride in what you've created here. You know the backgrounds of many characters and islands and the world of One Piece and merge it perfectly. I don't come across many people capable of such things. You have a special talent, keep nurturing it.

I must say I’m not really a big fan of this mc. He is way too manipulative and his personality is not too likable.But,overall it is a solid fanfic with good development.Just wished the author didn’t make the mc someone who manipulates everything and everyone around him.

MC Just wanna kill everyone , so disturbing to see It. . . . . . . .

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what should I say... Starting of story was good but gone down to drain later. I mean a planet level inflated to universe level. And it's inflated very fast in fight with marines was alright as you put in supposed to be but then, well I nothing else to say as writer's imagination. Your writing quality was better than me so 5-star so for speed of updating. Character design was good but not on full potential. Story development was good until just before end. I am not criticizing you but in good stories we don't inflat story like this. There is many stories where introduce bigger world then he was writing but that thing take process not like here where we just dump info at once. For future, please introduce bigger world step by step, like planet to solar system to star system to galaxy...

... ... Starts out pretty rough. Character is also pretty rough Struggled to continue for a while because it's rough. And then suddenly it becomes better as the story actually goes somewhere. 2 stars for the beginning. 5 stars for the later half. Right now, I'm really enjoying this though, especially with the constant updates 👍👍

This is the story of an edgy boy who died and was reincarnated into an extremely edgy boy, becoming the emperor of edgelords. If you're fine with an evil protagonist who always has a mask when interacting with people, manipulates everyone around him, and considers even those closest to him mere slaves and tools, this might be a story for you. The constant mask is annoying, but there's very little angst, so it's okay. Everything else about the story is pretty good, though. Well written, a fairly unique plot, the MC has a well thought out, enjoyable power growth, and his increasing influence is well shown in the One Piece world, he uses his metaknowledge well, and doesn't blindly follow canon. It's interesting. The MC is an evil, natural-born sociopath who doesn't open up to anyone but sleeps around a lot, which might put off a lot of people, but it's pretty rare to have an evil character who stays evil, even after he manipulates a bunch of women into falling in love with him.