Reviews of One Piece: Path to Power
One Piece: Path to Power
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One if not the best fanfic i've read on webnovel. Everthing is perfect. Be it the writing quality, the story or the plot. I enjiy this ver much. Every chapter is done with so much love from the author. Everyday It brings a smile on my face. I get so hyped every new chapter. This fanfic should get a nomination!
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and every ones opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
I really appreciate the creativity of the author of this novel, he can create stories that we never got from the original manga, because Oda's stories always make us only guess with the mysterious contents of the story. Even though this is just a fanfic, you create an interesting story by showing epic moments. thank you for the author for trying to make the story of each chapter in detail even though sometimes readers criticize the story of the wrong story year but you respond by apologizing and editing it, it's been extraordinary for a writer to develop his work once again thank you for entertaining me and other readers, continue in the future with your other interesting works. (By google translate)
There is a lot of things to say, yet I will write only a sentence to describe this... This is a gem! Do you have doubts? You read some grammatically disturbing fiction? Did you read characters who grown up such a rapid face that leads story becoming boring? Are you not sure about dialogs about this book? Well, all of that have FIVE STARS! My man the author made such a great story development and characters designs, and foreshadowing that I hope he will not stop ever. Anyways, I do not want to give spoiler nor I do not want to write a long sentence, I write one already but, you should read this book. Have no second thoughts, just read, have a cup of tea or coffee, and relax. You will go in an interesting journey :)
Time of the rocks pirates, One of the best fanfictions thats fits my taste on this site. Just writing these words cause I wana post..... Just writing Just writing these words cause I wana post..... Just writing these words cause I wana post..... Just writing these words cause I wana post..... Just writing these words cause I wana post..... Just writing these words cause I wana post.....
honestly i kind of don't like this as much as the last one while yes this is kind of more grounded and believable i feel like the other one is more enjoyable to read, it didn't treat the world of one piece as this gloomy world all the time, while there are times that, that is the case most of the time i feel like when im reading that one, it feel like it has more character, more of everything that makes it great. while i feel like this new one just focuses only on the gloomier aspects of the old one not only that, but when im reading the old one i personaly want to continue reading and wondering what will happen next even after reading it like ten times already, while this one i don't feel that enjoyment and every chapter i progress i just feel like this isn't worth reading and my brains trying to fall asleap, 5 times i tried progressing past 20 chapters and every time i read two chapters and i done i feel bored, this one isnt enjoyable to read the character, the beauty and the character interactions of the old book. compared to this one feels like heaven and earth, this one has almost to none of that. lets take Shakuyaku's character for instance, in the old one Damien kind got to know her for a couple of chapters and thier relationship kind of develop naturally in this one from reading till sabaody i feel like thier relationship is kind of forced and cringing at times. and lastly in the old one even if i know they are gonna be enemies in the future the rocks crew still has that camaraderie the you can feel while reading even the first 30 chapters in this it feels kind of muted, too much gloomy theme, too realistic, too forced to feel natural.
The original story had a solid plot, and on its merits was by far one of the best one piece fanfic I've ever read. The rewrite? It only removed the unnecessary angst from the original, but also made the progression far more realistic and fluid. The vocabulary is near perfect, with barely any grammatical errors, and near-perfect diction and syntax. And hopefully, the power scaling too will receive a much needed revamp, considering how far the manga has progressed since the original... All in all, a well-deserved 5 stars.
I have read this and it is already an indicator. Let's start with the pros: Lots of text. Well-written lore and knowledge of the author of one piece. Not too bad grammar. Now let's move on to the cons: The protagonist does not kill enemies, for some reason always leaving alive the strong, who can and will take revenge on him. It feels like the author is a child who is not even some 20 years old, because all the characters think rather narrowly. Terrible Chinese. All these "yonko" stages, black bones and everything. Not to mention certain words and expressions. In fact, following the story. The main character hasn't changed anything, hasn't changed anything, doesn't kill anyone significant out of principle, why? "This is my brilliant plan!" Which, by the way, was not explained to us. The strengths of the main character - the author immediately apes and nerfs. What is it for? He has super regeneration, able to close holes in the body in seconds, grow limbs, restore organs. Super strength is above Kaido's peak and stamina is also above it. But a young whitebeard without buffs is still cooler, with a weaker will. I put 3 stars.
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