As customs I shall drop the shameless 5 star review and get the ball rolling. Damien aka the mc has been reborn from a terrible life. Now he has a mother. Will he live on with the illusion that nothing has changed? That he hasn't changed? Or will something or someone change that thought? Damien will set out to reach the apex of this world alongside a crew of limited numbers, one with the power to truly turn the world upside down. He will venture through the Pirate Age, both before it's ignition and ride through it to reach his goals. He can be a hero to some, a villain to the others and just another pirate to the rest. ----- I hope you guys tag along and enjoy the read!
The best fan fiction on van peace that I have read in my life. I won't say anything about grammar, since I read with the help of a translator, which makes it almost impossible to notice mistakes, but the writing style is very pleasant to the eye. The character of the characters is very natural and there is no feeling that the author has changed them for the sake of his plot. The very infusion of MC into the plot also feels natural, which is very good. The beginning may seem cringe, as well as the actions of the main character in the first chapters may cause some to discard this fan fiction, but then the author has greatly improved. The battle scenes are written beautifully, the improvement of the main character's strength is consistent and fast, but it does not go beyond the OP. Romance also pleases, although the author constantly writes that such scenes are not given to him, for me they look very nice.
A really good start for a fanfic. Nice devil fruit. Good Talent. I hope the System wont dictate his life, because the strength of the people in One Piece fluctuate very much. And I hope his cheats wont become too rediculous. I like the curse release and a bloodline. I hope he works hard for his power.
Dope, sincerely I hope it's not dropped like every promising one piece fic. By the way, for those considering dropping the story because of the system at the start being a bit much, don't it gets better, a lot better. The greatest thing about this fic is when it's set, rocks pirate era is so interesting and something I've never seen explored. Forget all those joining the strawhats fics I need more rocks fanfics.
This is the best one piece fanfic I've ever read, haha I'm tired of readers who always say harsh words or negative words and many are due to their comments, many fanfics that I like are dropped. I hope they understand the many writers who earn nothing just to entertain readers to the point of racking their brains to write a good chapter. Just because of the genre or nature of mc's characters many flock to encourage other readers to pressure the author because they don't like the content of the story, please man if you don't like it don't read it and if you want a fanfic story according to your thoughts write your own fanfic and see the reactions of the people readers who read your writing so that you feel the feelings of the writers when you comment negatively. (By google translate)
One of, if not THE best One Piece fanfic I have had the pleasure to read. The idea and timeline setting at the start of the novel is new and interesting, the characters are well fleshed out, the devil fruit is interesting and the story progression and pacing is good and well thought out. The grammar is good, and I rarely notice any mistakes. Also has a good update schedule. I have no other words than that it's an amazing story. If you enjoy the One Piece world then this is a must read. 5/5.
there is a reason this novel has such a amazing rating. Its just so great, the author puts a lot of work with character and diolouge. You can actually feel a character's personlity. The author also pits imahes of the places along with the characters so your good. This is also very unqiue as the timeline is in rock's era, an era before roger's, there are some oc characters, and the coolness of being the fifth commander of rock's crew. First being whote beard, second being shiki, third being big mom, the dark king's future wife being fourth as the smart one, and kadio being 6th.