Reviews of One Piece: Merchant

Grammar is $hite, the author doesn't even bother to fix or even learn how to fix it. The idea is good but the execution is so bad Who the hell would want to read an R-18 full of grammar mistakes and typos? it's like watching p0rn with ****ty acting while the actors are stuttering and the video keeps buffering

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I like this fan-fic because I just like it and that’s my opinion and can’t be changed and I’m try to fill the review with many thing so yeah stop reading this and read the story.

The chapters are good. It was bad at grammar but then it got better. the idea of being a marchent MC is good but he must not forget that he's in the one piece world and needs to train and be stronger. As long as the author can balance between the merchant things and the fighting and story in general then it will be a good novel.

Good story, good character build-up update more chapter everyday novel is fun and Mc can eat as many as devil fruits he wants this is the best part. Overall interesting and fun novel waiting for new chapters.

Merchant.. I hope this novel story like the chronicle of elijah conquer world economy, anyway thank you for novel.

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Good idea. I love the idea and it is one of the better fan fictions I have ever read. Keep writing and I will keep reading. I am enjoying this so continue.

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