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Ending of rebirth part 2

Pokémon Narrative: It has been a month and Leon has been trying to gasps Kenbunshoku Haki now lets see what happens.

Leon: I sense people nearby I feel some are happy and some are worried but why?

BAAL: YOUR ABOUT TO BE BORN IDIOT.

Leon: wait what? but don't I have a month or two until then?

BAAL: IF YOU WERE PAYING ATTENTION YOU WOULD HAVE KNOWN ITS BEEN A MONTH FOR SOMEONE TRAINING YOUR OBSERVATION ABILITY YOU CAN'T TELL THE TIME CAN YOU?

Leon: well I was focused on trying to sense my surroundings

BAAL: WELL THEN I HOPE YOU DON'T CRY WHEN YOUR BORN I DON'T WANT A WEAK HOST.

Leon: But if I don't cry they will think something's wrong with me

BAAL: FIGURE IT OUT YOURSELF NOW THEN YOUR BE BORN ANY SECEND NOW DON'T GET TRAUMATIZED.

Leon: what do you mean by that? Oh I'm moving.

-Birth scene-

Unknown doctor: CONGRATULATIONS! It's a boy and it's not crying.

Unknown woman: WHO CARES GIVE ME MY BABY.

unknown man: ok dear, give her the baby.

unknown doctor: *gives the baby to woman*

unknown woman: hello little brat.

Leon: "well you can feel the mothery love from that"

unknown man 2: the baby isn't making any noise is something wrong with it?

unknown woman: My baby is perfectly fine he isn't a wimp

BAAL: YOU SOULD LAUGH OR SOMETHING JUST DON'T EMBARRASS YOURSELF OR CRY.

Leon: *giggles and laughs*.

unknown woman: See perfectly fine.

unknown doctor: so Rayleigh and Shakuyaku what's the baby's name?

Rayleigh: I say Leon

Shakuyaku: THATS A STUPID NAME.

Leon: "my name isn't stupids"

BAAL: IT IS STUPID YOU NEED A NAME FIT FOR A KING

Shakuyaku: He's name will be Solomon

Rodger: So it's decided his name is Silver Solomon, so crocus is everything alright?

Crocus: Yes everyone is healthy no problems your wife and child are healthy.

Solomon (previous Leon): "well I have to get used to the new name so my parents are Rayleigh Silver and Shakuyaku, wait Rayleigh silvers as in dark king Rayleigh from one Piece?!.

BAAL: WELL YOU CAN USE TRY AND SEE WHAT THEY LOOK LIKE ITS NOT LIKE YOU'VE BEEN TRYING FOR NOTHING IDIOT.

Solomon: "oh Right" *uses Kenbunshoku Haki* OMG IT IS RAYLEIGH IVE BEEN REBORN IN KNE PIECE" but it comes out as gibberish.

BAAL: YOU WOULD HAVE KNOW THAT IF YOU PAIDED ATTENTION MAYBE YOU SHOULD WORK ON THAT SOME MORE.

Solomon: "haven't I been training in Kenbunshoku Haki then?

BAAL: YES WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU BEEN TRAINING IN OBVIOUSLY IT NOT THAT BECAUSE YOU STILL CANT PAY ATTENTION TO THE OBLIVIOUS.

Solomon: "you don't have to be so rude all the time"

BAAL: I AM NOT RUDE IF I WAS RUDE THEN I WOULD OF DETRACTED YOU WHEN YOU TRAINED.

Solomon: "wait does this mean I have to live as a baby?"

BAAL: HAHAHAHA YEP HAVE FUN ILL COME BACK WHEN YOUR 6.

Solomon: "wait what why?"

My thoughts well then I hope people will give me positive criticism. Also the character is going to oblivious to things because it’s funny.

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