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Reviews of One piece: Journey with a system

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One piece: Journey with a system

Shaikh_Tohaa

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Golias
GoliasLv5Golias

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Chaotic_Winter
Chaotic_WinterLv11Chaotic_Winter

I’ll support you till the end if you make it a harem, as it’s a one piece world with lots of hot sexy women so please consider that plus do add some echhi content

Heavenlydemon
HeavenlydemonLv3Heavenlydemon

Fuck... Mc is fucking idiot Why he adventure with straw hat its make me drop it............................. (-__-) (*__*)(%__%) (®__®) (°_°) (¶_¶)

GramDemolition
GramDemolitionLv5GramDemolition

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Fadhli
FadhliLv6Fadhli

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DarthVegito
DarthVegitoLv10DarthVegito

Found out our MC is a slave to the celestial dragons sooooooooooooooooooooo 1/5 Rating no matter what. just not a good fanfic in general but that was kinda the last straw

DearCompanion
DearCompanionLv4DearCompanion

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TheDaoOfTheBear
TheDaoOfTheBearLv11TheDaoOfTheBear

I just read the first chapter though it does feel a little rushed I love it and would recommend it to my friends. I’m not telling you to start out in the womb and tell each day detail by detail I’m just saying after the quick start which I love you should slow it down. I’m

aborotob
aborotobLv6aborotob

awesome story line so far, the characters are great! can't wait for more development and this has an lot of potential to become a good fan-fin novel. work hard!! and thank you. Well good luck and plz don't drop the novel. View More

AaronTaichou
AaronTaichouLv10AaronTaichou

Sucks!!!!!!! Way too slow and boring for my taste! I only read the first three chapters and it already tells me that you are rushing things. As a fellow one piece write I can tell you it really helps if you watch the anime episodes while writting. It will make such a big difference.

mr_popo
mr_popoLv2mr_popo

First a question before the review. There are some old reviews even tho the chapters are new... maybe you deleted the chapters to remake the novel, that i don't know. But i read he joined the straw hats in a review and so, does he join the straw hats in the 'remake'? Story wise: Interesting that he started as a slave and the system is... well a system. Writing: Some mistakes here and there but nothing unreadable. Story: Not enough out there to really say anything. Char design: Same as story World background: Should be good as in OP has a good background. Dont know if it wil be shown in this novel tho... atleast not yet. (not enough chaps)

Shaikh_Tohaa
Shaikh_TohaaAuthorShaikh_Tohaa

Don't give a review or comment on the reason for Mc joining the Marine because his reason for joining the Marine is the biggest twist of this story. So if you excuse me and continue reading peacefully you will be able to understand the story better and with enough time you will be able to understand every reason for him every action and at the same time, you will start liking the story. Also, those who think that the Protagonist of this story is a warm and loving person with a carefree attitude than I will say that you are too naive my friend and you haven't seen anything dark or more twisted personality than our MC in this story is ....

musti48
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DaoistZIJh4p
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FAP_Master_
FAP_Master_Lv6FAP_Master_

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George_WEB
George_WEBLv6George_WEB

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pan39
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eLPe_X
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Good story

Daedra
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