Shaikh_Tohaa
First a question before the review. There are some old reviews even tho the chapters are new... maybe you deleted the chapters to remake the novel, that i don't know. But i read he joined the straw hats in a review and so, does he join the straw hats in the 'remake'? Story wise: Interesting that he started as a slave and the system is... well a system. Writing: Some mistakes here and there but nothing unreadable. Story: Not enough out there to really say anything. Char design: Same as story World background: Should be good as in OP has a good background. Dont know if it wil be shown in this novel tho... atleast not yet. (not enough chaps)
Don't give a review or comment on the reason for Mc joining the Marine because his reason for joining the Marine is the biggest twist of this story. So if you excuse me and continue reading peacefully you will be able to understand the story better and with enough time you will be able to understand every reason for him every action and at the same time, you will start liking the story. Also, those who think that the Protagonist of this story is a warm and loving person with a carefree attitude than I will say that you are too naive my friend and you haven't seen anything dark or more twisted personality than our MC in this story is ....