Reviews of One Piece: I was born as Celestial Dragon?!
One Piece: I was born as Celestial Dragon?!
Alekzi
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Yo! I first posted this story on scribblehub on account called Mordrake. I wasn't sure how this story was going to be, that's why I added there as test, but the people there gave a good feedback, so I decided to add it here as well. Hope you like it!!
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The personality of the mc is too bland for me, Author says that his personality will change and its for future character development but I am doubtfull of that, after all finding good character development on this site is almost immposible.The book is written well but like I said the mc is really unappealing to me, I don't want an mc who is a ruthless or anything like that, just an mc who is sure of himself and knows what to do and most importantly can stand for himself not some doormate that anyone can step on and this isn't a critic against this fi but recently I have seen a lot of fanfic gong for the 'realistic' approach in the world of fiction which personally I feel is dumb, realistic dosen't equate to interesting or fun to read,any way I will change the review if I feel that there is some change in the MC.
No no no no you cannot do this to me. I found this because I got a recommendation on my news feed and since that has disappointed me often, I thought this was going to be a uninteresting page again. My mind is blown. I read everything in one go. I was so into the story, I can actually believe it's real, but of course that's not the goal here and it would otherwise mess up the actual Canon. The MC is an interesting take on the Celestial Dragons. There were literally only a handful that didn't treat its people like dirt. If this story continues, I have a bad feeling that somethings going to mess up his plans and he gets a reality check. Either way, fantastic job. Definitely would read this again and recommend it, or pay money to see it animated. Have a good one!
1st time reading a celestial dragon MC in one piece so kinda refreshing. It's still 12 chaps, so far the momentum is good so I hope this fic will be consistent. I will be waiting for more chaps and please don't feed him logia fruit I think it's overrated, it will be useless against Haki(I think). Goodluck and Goodjob author[img=recommend]
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The story is great, it is well written, it has a good rhythm, logic and good construction of characters at the moment, I also liked the fruits (I vote for the water loggia or the water dragon), although I hope that the Mc does not begin to behave as a fanboy who just wants to help out and keep up with the main characters for no reason, it would be annoying, I'd like to see what changes and how far the Mc will be able to go (sorry if the comment is a little off track as so far no has reached that point, I only mention it because there are many ff where the Mc becomes the nanny of the protagonists and they ruin the story, and so far it is very good although it is just my personal opinion and I. I guess everyone has his point of view), anyway so far it's a good ff, I recommend it :)
