TheEnlightenedSage
I don't usually do review but since Robin asked me, I will The characters and their interactions are very well done from what I can see and not giving him any df power is something nice I think, many tend to think that df > not df, but did you see garp? he was going to kill an admiral at marineford if he wasn't stopped by the sengoku The pairings haven't been confirmed yet but I see him well with Robin If you want to add some things to your story you can make him use martial art such as Muay Thai or things like that since it feels like all op fanfic follow the marine power without trying to create or do anything on their own, I mean you can kick the air so imagine combining knowledge of earth martial arts with physics of OP?
Couldn't resist giving this one a 5 star review.. Especially after Robin chan and author san requested one in the latest chap (all others are hereby strategically ignored, ๐๐) . Refreshing to see someone who hasn't yet ate a devil fruit whooping ass in the one piece world with a ton of lovable crew mates really reminds me of Rayleigh n shanks, pretty interesting story so far, love the memorable character quotes the author puts up at the end of each chapter.. Pls do not drop author san or I will be sending the Baba Yagga after you๐๐๐๐. Keep up the good work.
It's really good story and I enjoy it, but when I got to "betrayal" it goes downhill. it wasn't betrayal it was more like disobedience, and also it was poorly executed. I think it was good if you just leave them be and let them realise that it was there loss that they leave the crew, no need for killing/bloodshed for that kind of thing. Its only my opinion thou and good luck writing author. Sorry for my bad english
At first it was interesting to read this work, I was seriously waiting for a new chapter every day. At the moment of the drug trip in which the MC fought with IM, he completely dropped it, so the desire to read just disappeared, it seemed that the author began to pay more attention to the lame quotes at the end of each chapter than to the chapters of fan fiction themselves. Author if you think this is a cool feature, then it's not, it sucks, return your attention to fan fiction, rather than a cool inappropriate quote.