so I just read the new chap and finally decided to drop now. the bad point of this story: first ever since the mc started his crew he somehow able to make ace join him (not to big of a deal btw) second many character acted more like an oc such as van augur (but this is not a big deal too as maybe the author just can't get the act right) third he recruited some useless girls from alabasta (among the three only robin was kinda useful because she can read poneglyph the other two was just a leech) fourth the powerlevel was shitty utterly shitty (he can win again dory and broggy, win again enel, and that leopard guy, can fight against sea king underwater, but lose again a vice admiral?) fifth he have haki but mostly useless (to the point I thought that is haki really that useless) sixth in the newst chapter the three girl want the mc to accept perona or they will the crew, when the mc don't care and started leaving. the three girl actually attacked him, and mc only punched their face once and that was just to knock them out. as for perona the mc already started to walk away and leave her, but somehow perona started to have a suicidal though and said her miserable life out loud, and the mc somehow feel guilt and what not decided to accept her and that where I drop this. the good point of this story is: first the flow and take was mostly different from other fic.
Too many inconsistencies throughout the story and also the last chapter i read the mc meets Van Augar and somehow doesnt recognize him and the author must have no idea that Van Augar is all about fate and that nonsense but not once did he mention it lol it seemed like it was an oc by how he acted until he said his name. Also there are bunch of multiple reviews on this fanfic with 5/5 so it is going to boost the rating so beware lol
I don't usually do review but since Robin asked me, I will The characters and their interactions are very well done from what I can see and not giving him any df power is something nice I think, many tend to think that df > not df, but did you see garp? he was going to kill an admiral at marineford if he wasn't stopped by the sengoku The pairings haven't been confirmed yet but I see him well with Robin If you want to add some things to your story you can make him use martial art such as Muay Thai or things like that since it feels like all op fanfic follow the marine power without trying to create or do anything on their own, I mean you can kick the air so imagine combining knowledge of earth martial arts with physics of OP?
As a person who is so used to reading fanfics with system and cheats, I thought this was going to disappoint me. But this story surprised me, it has a really good premise and I loved the character development of the MC. Also the author had a good grasp of some of the major characters of One Piece (I can't say I am person with extensive knowledge of One Piece but I was able to buy that this story was set in One Piece world), as the character interactions made me feel like I was watching the One Piece anime again but with the MC's story. Also this story does not follow the canon word by word, there is a lot of creativity going in this story. I also loved that the author is not afraid of experimenting with the canon story, I was getting tired of reading One Piece fanfics which follows canon and the MCs doing anything extra. Also the MC is not weak, he might not be the strongest in One Piece but he can be a bit troublesome for his enemies, just read the first 16 chapters and see if this fanfic is for you. For those who are hesitating to read give this fanfic a try and see if this if for you. I enjoyed reading it, Good job author and is looking forward to updates. P.S. I dont write reviews usually, so I apologize if was this was not helpful.
Couldn't resist giving this one a 5 star review.. Especially after Robin chan and author san requested one in the latest chap (all others are hereby strategically ignored, 😜😜) . Refreshing to see someone who hasn't yet ate a devil fruit whooping ass in the one piece world with a ton of lovable crew mates really reminds me of Rayleigh n shanks, pretty interesting story so far, love the memorable character quotes the author puts up at the end of each chapter.. Pls do not drop author san or I will be sending the Baba Yagga after you😂😂😘👍. Keep up the good work.