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One Piece- Rising To The Top

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i expect this story to be great and please go with bone bone fruit and all the ideas i gave you for attacks [Bone Spikes] [Bone sword] [skeleton soldiers] [ribs cage ] [Hakuryuu no umarekawari] (means reincarnation of white dragon] [Bone bullets] [Bone lance] [Bone armor] [Bone form : asura] (the one when he turn into a huge skeleton with a lot of hands like netero's nen ability say it's like asura 1000 hands ) make his bones at least as hard and strong as steel or even stronger that's because there are characters can cut steel easily like swordmans as we already see zoro cut steel in alabasta so make it stronger and another technique [Bone Parasite] (can shot a little bone inside someone body in a form of an insect and control his skeleton that mean controlling him i took this one from doflamingo cause it's great and make him swordman since he will be using bone sword like kimimaro's sword not a fucking bone katana ) also kimimaro's bones manipulation also [Bone claws] and [Bone gatling] shot bones bullets from all his fingers together at a fast speed like kizaru's yasakani no magatama .... if you need more i will be happy to help consider it please and make another place for him i mean 4 admirals place not three i always think it should be like this so no one should be replaced his relationship with other close friend with aokijo and fujitora garp sengoku tsuru momosagi chaton and a just friend with kizaru but with akainu never mind it also found him a good way to travel like aokiji did but for him he can creat skeleton creatures maybe a skeleton sea king and his coat hands colour is grey

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I hope Tora become a admarl then gather a crue and leave the Marine please don't do some bulsht like she stay in the Marine after she becomes an admarl caus wee all know if u be a admarl u have to be the doge of the celestel