Altara
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Make the story more longer pls, it's okay to rush it a little till arabasta. I know this is the ark / part where it's getting interesting. But consider the fact that you can make more chapter that entertaining while planning on your own story based on the material you have (one piece and pokemon) I know this isn't easy, so take your time enjoying your work and writing it.
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The concept is great, the story flownis nice. What you need to add is the normal one piece tropes, like sanji and zoro always fighting at small things, usop goffing around *not really with luffy cuz the mx change the character but he can try* copper being cute and shouting for doctor even he is a doctor *maybe he can shouting for the egg pokemon*. There's a lot other than that. Tho some the plot differ from the original, some key points still can exists. Like when after arabasta ark you can add the party scene in the castle and bath scene |・ω・`) *i want this scene cuz the king show his low key and the ero old man jokes after peeking* Mr.2 sacrifice maybe needed or not i dunno
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