Reviews of One More Time: Rebirth
One More Time: Rebirth
lynerparel
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Hi, author here. I just needed to post this so that everyone that has read this work of mine before can understand. So there are no misunderstandings, first off, I am the original author of this work. I posted this on Wattpad and Royalroad back in my high school days. So you might remember it. Due to some reasons, I needed to remove them. Now, this might seem like that original work of mine, but I added a lot of new scenes and things. So this is a remake of that original work of mine. So I hope you guys don't go around saying I stole this. Cause how can I steal from myself? Alright, that's all I wanted to say to clarify the situation.
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Although too early to review. It's from the same author as demon lord's reincarnation and that too a prequel so I am excited about it. Although it might look cliche but things are more difficult than MC's previous world and the first real fight did take him everything to fight. Hope author continues the momentum...
This book has potential and i can see there is a bit of a harem genre to it and it would be such a waste if this novel go to such a path like having a wife on each race, I think the first 2 potential love interest is enough already because it tends to get very messy when authors start expanding the harem. Although I am still waiting for the author to put more depth in the surrounding like what is the name of the empire/country they belong to or even the general population of the village woudn't be bad but it is still early to whether this novel would turn out good or bad. I also notice a few mistakes in the grammar.
Nice story idea and characters. That's about all I can praise this story for. Narration is incredibly convoluted, and the story reads more like an attempt at hero's diary than a novel. If you hate novels where autor has to note out POV changes, this isn't for you since the story has no "flow". Might be a decent binge-read at +-150 chapters.
Adopted Soldier is one of my favorite books on this site, and the other book of the author demon lord's reincarnation is also pretty amazing. This story is also as good. Though the first few chapters might not seem as impressive (probably because the author said he had written those in high school), the story really picks up soon. It is amazing and the characters are really lovely. Keep it up author.
I like the concept of being reborn through reverse vore (coming out the vag!na) and following the mc's new childhood, but i gotta say i had to drop at around chapter 20. Mc was reborn and is around ten. He got atleast 30 years on his new friends. He is past being an ***** and i understand the allure of harems but man, they aint legal yet, why ya gotta describe em like that
Was really good and well done for the first 15 chapters then out of nowhere turns into a absolute clichefest MC turns into an idiot a hole and he's commended for it. Must of been one hell of an asshole in his previous life don't think he had no friends due to his while revenge more his hidden arrogance. In the words of someone it's another world MC can talk a train at two cause it fits for that world but can speak a language for which he doesn't even knows exist to many holes god it's such a shame was really well done for a while will continue an hope it gets better again
Remove character names and you will see the cookie cutter blandness for what it is. Honestly there is nothing special in this novel that any veteran has seen this premise done better anywhere else. Sad to see I wasted my time reading this again only to see an old comment of mines detailing how bland it is. Hopefully this review stays up.
