Reviews of Life, Death and More
Life, Death and More
Edho_Okati
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After reading the first five chapters I can say that this is an excellent start. The premise is intriguing with alot of ways you can take the plot. I see this story as a starting pint with alot of potential. Keep up the good work.
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this is stupid....here me out.......first the english...i get it,,,,,no one is great but damn it atleast fix his and her............now the story.....it is interesting but the relationships **** it up........ex: MC got betrayed by some ***** and dosnt know if he wants revenge,,,,,,,,,,MC has a wife but she hates him because she is married to him cause he is weak and some ****..........MC now wants his wife to love him even if its forced.....in the latest chps the wife is only interested in him for his sudden gain in strength.........conclusion ****ty relationships and MC that also has barely any character development mess this story up............sorry if I am harsh,....just my thoughts