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Omniverse Adventure: Alternate

Author: OtakuSumit
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Read Omniverse Adventure: Alternate fanfiction written by the author OtakuSumit on WebNovel, This serial novel genre is Anime & Comics fanfic stories, covering r18, system, transmigration, antihero, immortal. ✓ Newest updated ✓ All rights reserved

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Arun goes on a adventure into the Omniverse. Be it Supernatural or fantasy powers or Advance Technology he obtains them through self-creation or via hunting. The Journey will be more of a laid back or carefree one so don't expect too much drama, powerful villains popping left and right and mc goes even if there are little benefits. no, if there are no benefits or there are benifits if he doesn't feel like he will not go and play hero. He will kill, sometimes for experiments sometimes just for fun but he will kill. ( I will improve this synopsis later)

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This has quite a bit of potential. But it also has quite a few flaws. Your sentence structure could use some work. You have a tendency to write run on sentences and seem to have a great deal of difficulty describing things. I recommend that you practice writing poetry, it'll help you smooth out your writing, and make writing descriptions easier. I can't say much about the world background because I've never read Demon Slayer. Your character could use some work. What are his motives and desires, other than just survival and power? Does he have lines he won't cross, things that bother him? Without these things, you risk creating another generic murderhobo, and this site has too many of those as is. A little murder hobo here and there is fine, but all murder hobo all the time is not. I hope you find this review helpful.

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