Oblivions Regulator

This is the intro to my handmade novel series for the dc/marvel universe, please give me constructive criticism as to how I can better improve my story thank u P.s. None of the characters belong to me and I do not own marvel nor Dc I only own the respective characters I create an input into these stories I also do not own any of images I may use btw I will also input the extra images on wattpad of what I believe the checker would look like I also write backstories that's all, for now, thank u. All rights Reserved No Copyright ©