fatiguek
I like the story a lot. Better than other trashy novels there in webnovel. Love************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************
It's getting better and better. Just write a little more frequently please. Isolation is killing me. ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
So far its nice....MC has a system but its not the normal type...[read and you'll understand]..... suggestion: Make MC OP...power vector manipulation and then later molecule manipulation-yes I want a **** you level MC.....keep MC smart and OP, not a retarded pervert...add some romance and fluff, just dont make it shallow or cliche, like chicks only like MC cause he looks good or is OP, build the romance, dont make MC or his lovers whores..anyway GL
Loving the book so far ‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️Loving the book so far ‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️Loving the book so far ‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️Loving the book so far ‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️
I like how the story is progressing so far. You are doing great, just don't listen to idiots trying to turn your story into trashy someone insulted you=kill him type. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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this mc is trash..... fucking beta mc, he is stupid that doesn't know how to use his cheat, and he can't fight at all. dude makes himself handsome and then put a mask on, like wtf...why make your self handsome if you don't want to show it, and people make fun of him because he got a mask on his face.
great story! expexpexpexpexpexpexepxepexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexepxepexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexepxepexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexepxepexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexepxepexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexepxepexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexepxepexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexepxepexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexepxepexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexepxepexpexp
So, honestly, didn't really expect this be as good as it was. In comparison, almost all other novels or fanfictions with a similar premise suffer from bad writing be it grammar wise or story development. But, with this none of these issues were present, it's simply just good, pretty good read, especially, for this site.