Reviews of Nova Roma

At the age of five, the main character already communicates with the emperor like a friend, has a wife for ten years who was raped. The main character immediately fell in love with her and paved her. The author has a clear desire for NTR. Disgusting heroes, weak plot, no sense of rhythm 0.1 / 10

there will always be plot armor in stories but the bad start that introduced the plot armor and then added more plot armor right away just made it worst let start with the make me a god wish (but what powers does that bring) is this fantasy or historical fiction, then we have knowledge of all things wish ( that is so vague and overpowered for a god that supposedly lost) what year did he die is important information i might of missed it not sure does he literally know everything?? hypnotism?! that is horrible plot armor for these type of novels you might as well just skipped to hes 12 if you want to deal with personality of maturity changes. all of this is my opinion and i can see you put alot of effort into the story by the number of chapters written and i want to tough it out till atleast chapter 20 but the first 5 chapters have just turned me off and the im a god thing partnered with the hypnotism is too much.

The story has a nice plot line. The most interesting thing is base of roman history and that is unusual, ! I like¡. Its has some grammars mistake, like pronoun, verbs etc. If you can found someone to do some proofreading that will be very nice.

Seriously this book needs an editor. The writing quality is worst. Comparable to an mtl. In the bigining story devolved very fast. It needs more details to engage the audience. It felt like reading a manual. 2nd chapter is unique in a way and is the best way to convay the mc's plans. Hope to see that more.

A great concept gone wrong. Everything happens and ends too fast, the story isn't even a bit well developed. The writing is absolute garbage, grammar was brutally murdered in the making of this novel.

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Interesting plot ruined by garbage grammar, MR. and Mrs in a time where that wasnt used at all. Separating conversations in different lines makes things difficult to read or enjoy. Then out of nowhere character just forgets his mannerisms and attitudes of five years and start acting like he was in the old life which is crap, Then out of nothing, just thin air, he finds out he has hipnotic powers activated by eye contact, which he never tried before or found by mistake. And suddenly the story turned into obey me at all times kind of garbage. I do not recommend story. Esta novela es una mierda. El autor sigue separando las conversaciones lo que hace leer esta basura mas dificil y me quita las ganas de continuar. El autor sigue utilizando MR y MRs como si eso fuera utilizado en los tiempos romanos. Y para culminar esta diarrea de novela, el autor decidio de la nada que el personaje tiene un poder de hipnosis cuando mira a la gente en sus ojos. Un poder que nunca sabia que tenia ni que habia practicado ni que por error habia activado. En resumen esto es una churrada de novela por un autor novato sin sentido de comun ni un poco de buscar informacion para ver como eran las cosas en esos tiempos. No leas.

I don't see much problems when it comes to grammar, and the plotline is amazing. It is well-written, and keep up with the incredible work!!!!!!!!

The writing quality aren't bad. Readable at least. The idea of the story is quite good for me, it's about someone who reborn in Era of Roman Empire. The stability is quite good to, not as crazy as einlion but would give him A at least. Overall I would give him 4.7 Don't give up Author ฅ'ω'ฅ

I really like this novel. The mix between mythology is incredible. The world building is decent. Although, some of the side character seems to be forgotten. I think MC's Mother should be more in the main story. I dont know. Its just my opinion. Overall its a good story.

One of my favorite stories..Its so interesting! Amazing character designing, great story development, the translation is flawless..you all need to give this story more attention. I think it deserves to be in the top 3..Nova is a really good story!

Good one but the novel extremely needs grammer check. I dont know if author translate it with google translate or something similar but idea of Rome is perfect

The premise is amazing and I wish more people had similar stories but it is held back by the skill of the author and the need of an editor. The characters are all bland and the Mc feels like the typical SI robot with no motivation for his goals and is invincible in terms of knowledge and power, even though the world revolves around his actions and decisions he still doesn’t seem like a part of it. Although many story’s are like this or worse the premise of this story is really good and has tons of potential. My wish is for the author to continue writing for a year or two and then redo this story and turn it into something unique.

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One of my favorite stories..Its so interesting! Amazing character designing, great story development, the translation is flawless..you all need to give this story more attention. I think it deserves to be in the top 3.. Nova is a really good story!

Hortible grammar, extreme 1-dimensionality, FL is unlikeable, Mc is unnaturaly cold, and the hypnosis skill really ruined it the challenge of it.

Was going to read this until I read the reviews... Now I think I'll continue looking. But five stars anyway, since I can't really criticise.