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Reviews of Not Dead Yet (discontinued)

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Not Dead Yet (discontinued)

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ThiCCConcubine
ThiCCConcubineLv4ThiCCConcubine

Can i get aaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh. Boneless harry potter arm. But yeh nah good way to write a fanfic in my honest onion. Do some high quality world building and fu.ck off the clearly flawed oc characters. 69/420 would ramble incoherently again.

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Jack_Cerbrus
Jack_CerbrusLv14Jack_Cerbrus

Reveal spoiler

Civilian_Shinobi
Civilian_ShinobiLv11Civilian_Shinobi

I can see why this so so very beloved. I love reading and traveling, maybe I love reading because I end up traveling to different worlds? Anyway this drew me in from the start and I , literally, binged this in a day. Every chance I got I was reading this. It was ridiculouslyďżź hard to but it down. Thank you (the Author) for all the thought you but into your creation! It was much appreciated. With regards, Civ.

Sanjusin
SanjusinLv12Sanjusin

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Bored_Chu
Bored_ChuLv4Bored_Chu

This novel is absolutely amazing! I can now understand why this novel has so many fans. I didn’t bother reading it before because... I don’t know... probably because I couldn’t understand anything from the first chapter. (This is so embarrassing to say out loud...) But now... I come back to read some fan fictions, and mind you, I was just looking through the sections, and then I come across this masterpiece! I didn’t even remember reading through any of this but now... I truly believe that this is a really good novel. As a author myself, I’m truly jealous of this work. Continue to work hard author!

AvidReader962
AvidReader962Lv14AvidReader962

Definitely an awesome female main character, great world building in the Harry Potter world, and a fantastic plot that definitely adds more depth overall to the Harry Potter story. Very much looking forward to future chapters and I think this is a story you should definitely give a try.ďżź

WolfxofxDemons
WolfxofxDemonsLv15WolfxofxDemons

Really good ff should update more chapters is a shame you stopped.

Will_Caruso
Will_CarusoLv4Will_Caruso

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CarmenZenitram
CarmenZenitramLv13CarmenZenitram

I was skeptic at first as I read the title. Being a huge fan of Harry Potter, I had my doubts. However, it was not as I expected. I'm still in the firstfew chaptersbut Ican't wait to give a review because it's very promising. Here's hoping the story will entice me to the very end. 😉

Midnight_Riding
Midnight_RidingLv4Midnight_Riding

A nicely done plot, with the amount of actual potterness reduced satisfactorily. An intriguing look at the mystical underbelly (beyond borgin and burkes, or black markets). Overall, pleasing and realistic design for the characters and world. Would recommend no romance for mc (other than her lovely sire-bond, vincent azrael). Also, enjoyable interactions shown for the social games of the nobles. (it's a sideways crown)

Garyhia_Sampson
Garyhia_SampsonLv3Garyhia_Sampson

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tomthedevil
tomthedevilLv5tomthedevil

I like the story. Aasssssssdgghhjiut dd bejrjejejrkrktktkehwgwhwjrktkrhsgsktk ehwhejrjevwvdjrkfjdbsnfđtkendbdjrmfndbwvbeb je jrn rbrnrnrnrnrbebshfmrnrms jejrjrnrnrnt

linear_salo
linear_saloAuthorlinear_salo

Because I'm shameless enough to review my own story. Well done me for updating again. I shall endure! I love reading the comments section and probably have one of nicest reader communities (strange considering the amount of murder in this story). This is as fun to write as it is to read so I foresee a beautiful future of updates.

khmyriahy
khmyriahyLv2khmyriahy

Very interesting I like the cover I like the background❤❤❤ ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ I like the characters In the story Its a well indeed Interesting story The writing is well written

Derpy_Bird
Derpy_BirdLv13Derpy_Bird

Personally i find this as one of my top favorite story's on this website currently and from i have seen from fan fics before they usually get dropped if they are not popular enough so im writing this to help, because i think this story deseves it.

blaze0625
blaze0625Lv13blaze0625

So far so good. Begrudgingly picked this one as it seemed the least mediocre and had the most chapters. Turns out that I ended up loving it!! Anxiously waiting for more chapters though

July_Supreme
July_SupremeLv4July_Supreme

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