Marikit
I love the story so far. The plot is unique and stand out from the clichés. The first chapter was confusing at first after I read the synopsis but that confusion made me engaged in the story. I like your first chapter title by the way😉. Your writing style is awesome and I like the long chapters because as a reader it's worth the wait. The book's name is also interesting, it makes anyone to take a look. So far I like the story..👍keep it up..Good luck.😊
The storyline is captivating... from the starting line to furthermore it hooked me to reading...The characters are well portrayed...The writing style is good and on point. The interesting thing I liked is when I was reading the book is that it's said from a third-person point of view. Can't wait to read more...Highly recommend it!!! Keep up the good work, author!