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Reviews of Nightmare of the Artificial Island

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Nightmare of the Artificial Island

Shamira_Farhath

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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

I should be honest, this needs rough editings. There is a mix of the present (Is) and past (was) tense in the narrations. Please choose only one from now on. There are also unnecessary spaces in the dialogues. I say the story potential is there. You should edit it and this review will be invalid if you do so. Kudos! I hope I did help.

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kuhaku_sora
kuhaku_soraLv3kuhaku_sora

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Findmysteryinme
FindmysteryinmeLv2Findmysteryinme

Ah the start is really good. to be honest I loved the descriptions. you have a good writing style but I think you can work on your punctuation marks. I saw there are some unnecessary spaces between the punctuation marks. mostly in dailogues. Other than that it's a great read.

Lancee
LanceeLv1Lancee

You have a way with words that make each read seem seamless. I like the story potrayed by the characters making their interaction realistic with an amusing theme. Great character development, overall a great story.

Lordoftheweebs
LordoftheweebsLv2Lordoftheweebs

Good.

fahad_nawaz
fahad_nawazLv1fahad_nawaz

The plot develops well throughout the chapter and the picture created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline. As a reader I got sunk in this world the author had created. A fascinating escape from reality into another world. A great read :)

Suroj_Sapayev
Suroj_SapayevLv2Suroj_Sapayev

first of all great cover) FL sou ds fresh, I choose this novel for its ideas) I'm sure that the author will improve every aspect of the book in the future. pay attention to this story folks

Proteety_Promi
Proteety_PromiLv2Proteety_Promi

I'm not a great fan of science fiction, but this one is mind-blowing. The story has a good plot with an amazing writing style. Good work, author!

QueenRani6
QueenRani6Lv3QueenRani6

Nice title and great book cover. The story is not one that grabs attention immediately but rather, it needs patience and a few more chapters to understand and truly fall in love with the character and that was epic! Nice storyline.

Itsuki_Suzuki
Itsuki_SuzukiLv3Itsuki_Suzuki

Hmmm, well written the synopsis and the world background but I don't know what is the point of the main character. I think we will know it for the upcoming chapters. No problem with the grammar.

hansora
hansoraLv13hansora

Only have 10 chapters so far so we still couldn't see well where the plot would dive into. The idea is interesting enough. The writing could still be polished up nevertheless Keep up the good work!

fifyfd
fifyfdLv1fifyfd

the story and the concept is interesting the imagination of the author is wonderful the narration goes well with the characters and story but there were few grammatical, tense errors I hope the author have fixed those in the Futher chapters overall amazing story good work author

asi_aami
asi_aamiLv1asi_aami

Good work👍. Your novel is getting more and more interesting now. Thank you so much it's gonna be my time killer on 2021.Need more chapters. Keep going✌

DaoistSMyalG
DaoistSMyalGLv1DaoistSMyalG

Awesome imagination & thrilling story line its really getting as into the story ....great start👏👏keep rocking shamiii🥳🥳🥳🥳 Egarly waiting for the upcoming chapter....

soundarya_99
soundarya_99Lv1soundarya_99

Excellent grip of language and taught process 👏👏 Fantabulous storyline✨✨. Keep posting us the delightful work💖.. Keep up the good work 💐💐. I'm thrilled!! Eagerly waiting for ur upcoming story track post it as soon as possible 🥳🥳

asi_aami
asi_aamiLv1asi_aami

Great job. Your story is going on interesting. Please update daily. Good luck.Need more chapters. Overall awesome thought process. All the best.

asi_aami
asi_aamiLv1asi_aami

Well done! apt to current world pandemic....you had narrated everything in a clean and understandable way ...good luck interested to read more chapters..