SirSacrilege
An honest opinion of my own work, I think its average, nothing to good, I still hope people enjoy it but to be honest most wont, I have an odd kind of writing style that quite a few people will dislike but hey maybe your one of the people who will love it. Tell me here if you like it or not and let others decide if they want to spend their time on it. Thanks all y'all.
First, I will tell you that much much, I encourage whatever you are going through. And second, and this question may sound a bit selfish, but, are you going to come back? I mean this is one of the best I have seen even if it is short already is intense, so to speak, the idea, the environment, etc ... it is well written, so don't give up on the novel, I see that it has a future and someone who has read hundreds of these novels tells you, I'll give you two requests for power to give you something encouragement and some publicity if possible good luck and encouragement partner do not give up !!!